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Ode to Her
You take the time to
read my words
breathe them in
Sights of the morning
rain on my face
ice on the lake
trees on the shore
grey clouds
and
pale blue skies
To let me know
they help you find joy
in the little things
You tell me that my words
have meaning
impact
make connections
More than pretty pictures
Thank you
read my words
breathe them in
Sights of the morning
rain on my face
ice on the lake
trees on the shore
grey clouds
and
pale blue skies
To let me know
they help you find joy
in the little things
You tell me that my words
have meaning
impact
make connections
More than pretty pictures
Thank you
Published 7th Jan 2024
Author's Note
An appreciation of connections through poetry.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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7th Jan 2024 12:19pm
You’re welcome, my friend. Thank you for this.
I cherish your words and our friendship. You’re genuine, kind and your presence on these pages has been uplifting and an inspiration. I look forward to your posts. Quite often I carry your thoughts with me after I read you.
Keep doing you, please!😊
It’s a perfect day for a perfect day. Go grab yourself one.
I cherish your words and our friendship. You’re genuine, kind and your presence on these pages has been uplifting and an inspiration. I look forward to your posts. Quite often I carry your thoughts with me after I read you.
Keep doing you, please!😊
It’s a perfect day for a perfect day. Go grab yourself one.
8th Jan 2024 1:47am
Awww, this is really sweet. You expressed yourself
with beauty and admiration. Smiled the whole time reading:)
Thanks for sharing this!
with beauty and admiration. Smiled the whole time reading:)
Thanks for sharing this!
8th Jan 2024 2:30am
Dear A,
Thank you for reading and commenting. I am appreciating the connections and emotions that writing can create. 🌹
Thank you for reading and commenting. I am appreciating the connections and emotions that writing can create. 🌹
12th Jan 2024 1:44am
12th Jan 2024 2:44pm
26th Jan 2024 5:27pm
Very fitting and well deserved praise!
She (Her) graciously takes time to read and comment on my work as well and I see her smile on many other pieces.
Very noble of you to honour her this way!
x~
She (Her) graciously takes time to read and comment on my work as well and I see her smile on many other pieces.
Very noble of you to honour her this way!
x~
