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Last Christmas...
Those frilly little snowflakes
the melancholic cold winter breeze
fresh frosty freeze on your nose
No hot chocolate but some cakes
wish there was snow, to seize
the days of cold, cheeks that froze
Hand to hold, walk the holly
and then at night, feel the jolly
mistletoe, presents-a-plenty
How I wished
for a white Christmas this year,
no presents wrapped
none but a lone cheer,
no tree, and lights that sneer
as I drive past these festive streets.
Santa claus,
Have I been a naughty girl?
Next year, will you visit?
Send your elves to make my toys
I'll promise, to cherish the joys
So please, please, please!
Come down my chimney new year...
Published 4th Jan 2024
| Edited 28th Apr 2024
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4th Jan 2024 10:17am
5th Jan 2024 4:20am
Yes,
lights and the thought of a new year..
Would've been better if it snowed here though :(
Thanks for your visit!
:)
lights and the thought of a new year..
Would've been better if it snowed here though :(
Thanks for your visit!
:)
4th Jan 2024 11:18am
5th Jan 2024 4:21am
4th Jan 2024 3:07pm
Warm fresh, and unique poem. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to more. Hugs and peace, Oral
5th Jan 2024 4:22am
I really appreciate your kind words!
I certainly hope you can continue to enjoy my works!
:)
I certainly hope you can continue to enjoy my works!
:)
4th Jan 2024 8:28pm
5th Jan 2024 4:23am
Anonymous
5th Jan 2024 2:13am
Your words are presented with the warmth of that special day such that i'm captured by the feeling you've left. i see the snowy roads with slighrides and dogs leaping to catch the flakes. This is filled with affection and skill and a desire for the joy unseen. i enjoyed this very much.
5th Jan 2024 4:26am
Your words are so kind and I'm so happy to have inspired you as such!
I certainly hope that you can continue to enjoy what I write!!
Winter definitely has its own charms!
:)
I certainly hope that you can continue to enjoy what I write!!
Winter definitely has its own charms!
:)
Anonymous
5th Jan 2024 4:27am
i'll certainly be reading more soon.
9th Jan 2024 2:20am
This is pure goodwill and joyful festivity. The magic in your words turns on my lights like a Christmas tree with Santa's gifts below. There is a spirit in your poetry that is a return to the innocence of yesteryear. Love, love, the revelry in your words. Each image is a dance of light and love.
John
John
9th Jan 2024 3:08am
I'm so glad you found joy with my words in many ways!
Hope you have dreams of sweet sugarplum fairies to visit to share more love!!
<3
Hope you have dreams of sweet sugarplum fairies to visit to share more love!!
<3
