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Take Me
Take Me...
because I'm fed the fuck up
with complaints pains
and restraints
and the boiling bullshit
of the day to day
Im tired of the laments
that never go away
Im sick of the games
so many people play
Take Me with your
Lips tongue and hands
show me that you...
are a real man
I am naked before you..
and here I stand
as my sanity dangles
on one thin strand
Take Me...
inside your mouth
penatrate me hard
and cover my mouth
and I dont care how
twisted this seams
Take Me...
and make my juicy ass scream
Take Me
on the bed
in the kitchen
on the floor
Take Me
until I cant take
anymore
Take me
until the worlds
voices are obliterated
and I am saturated
with sex and sweat
From me the world
just
takes
takes
takes
now its time for me
to get...
The big pay back
on my back
or side or however
you lay me
just GIVE IT TO ME
and please dont play me
I need to forget this day
and all its woes
I need to get caught up
In passionate throes
so..
Take me
and dont let go
and when Im done...
I'll let you know
because I'm fed the fuck up
with complaints pains
and restraints
and the boiling bullshit
of the day to day
Im tired of the laments
that never go away
Im sick of the games
so many people play
Take Me with your
Lips tongue and hands
show me that you...
are a real man
I am naked before you..
and here I stand
as my sanity dangles
on one thin strand
Take Me...
inside your mouth
penatrate me hard
and cover my mouth
and I dont care how
twisted this seams
Take Me...
and make my juicy ass scream
Take Me
on the bed
in the kitchen
on the floor
Take Me
until I cant take
anymore
Take me
until the worlds
voices are obliterated
and I am saturated
with sex and sweat
From me the world
just
takes
takes
takes
now its time for me
to get...
The big pay back
on my back
or side or however
you lay me
just GIVE IT TO ME
and please dont play me
I need to forget this day
and all its woes
I need to get caught up
In passionate throes
so..
Take me
and dont let go
and when Im done...
I'll let you know
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hmmm...
29th Apr 2012 1:14am
re: hmmm...
29th Apr 2012 2:00am
Raw instincts
29th Apr 2012 1:30pm
Wow!! How powerfully erotic is this? You express so beautifully an emotion that most people have but are too frightened to admit - the desire just for a hot, hard, forceful fuck with no real pretense of sex. Fantastically written. Thank you so much for sharing
D x
D x
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re: Raw instincts
29th Apr 2012 10:50pm
Thank You Waggy....
Its the realest emotion in us sometimes...
The need to be touched.
thanks for reading!
Its the realest emotion in us sometimes...
The need to be touched.
thanks for reading!
.....................
.......now, here I stand
A for real, beautiful, dark-chocolate, sexy, sensual kinda' man
Who stands in wonder
as to what you would do
If without warning, I bend you over the kitchen table
and thrust my thick, black cock deep inside of you.....(http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/28214-what-would-you-do-if-i/)
Still, my contention is that sex is still the best pain elixir, depression fixer, wonder drug ever known. Heather Headley stated it so prophetically in her song "He is". Read the poem. It will make you feel better, promise. : )
A for real, beautiful, dark-chocolate, sexy, sensual kinda' man
Who stands in wonder
as to what you would do
If without warning, I bend you over the kitchen table
and thrust my thick, black cock deep inside of you.....(http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/28214-what-would-you-do-if-i/)
Still, my contention is that sex is still the best pain elixir, depression fixer, wonder drug ever known. Heather Headley stated it so prophetically in her song "He is". Read the poem. It will make you feel better, promise. : )
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re: .....................
29th Apr 2012 10:52pm
I read the poem.....alls I can say is
Awesome!
Thanks for reading and sharing!
Awesome!
Thanks for reading and sharing!
re: Take Me
Anonymous
30th Apr 2012 4:32pm
Firebyrd,
You have expressed how so many feel at one point or another. Great job! Loved your lines:
"Take me
until the worlds
voices are obliterated
and I am saturated
with sex and sweat"
Hope you were "Taken" care of ; )
enjoyed,
tornado
You have expressed how so many feel at one point or another. Great job! Loved your lines:
"Take me
until the worlds
voices are obliterated
and I am saturated
with sex and sweat"
Hope you were "Taken" care of ; )
enjoyed,
tornado
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re: re: Take Me
2nd May 2012 2:00pm
Tornado,
thankyou for your kind comments
NO I wasnt "Taken care of"
thats why I wrote it so enthusiasticly!
LOL!
BUt its cool,
when Im in doubt
I seek a poem out!
relieves the tension
thanks for reading
thankyou for your kind comments
NO I wasnt "Taken care of"
thats why I wrote it so enthusiasticly!
LOL!
BUt its cool,
when Im in doubt
I seek a poem out!
relieves the tension
thanks for reading
loved it!
30th Apr 2012 5:34pm
I feel like someone has scribbled my emotions in elegant words..sometimes u want to ge fucked hard to forget the shit life around u..and u want the fucking to comepletely reign over ur mind and in those shattering orgasms forget everything..loved this poem..made me want it too
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re: loved it!
2nd May 2012 2:02pm
Thank you Mystery,
Sometimes we feel ths way....
cant help it.. life has been
a bit crappy for me lately so I just
wrote how I wanted to feel...
eventhough It never happend to me LOL
thanks for reading!
Sometimes we feel ths way....
cant help it.. life has been
a bit crappy for me lately so I just
wrote how I wanted to feel...
eventhough It never happend to me LOL
thanks for reading!
Lovely!
Anonymous
2nd May 2012 4:25pm
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re: Lovely!
2nd May 2012 5:21pm
Thank you Fiveman,
Sometimes a soul crys out when it has had
quite enough of the world!
thanks for reading!
Sometimes a soul crys out when it has had
quite enough of the world!
thanks for reading!
...
Anonymous
2nd May 2012 11:10pm
enjoyed!!
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re: ...
3rd May 2012 9:33pm