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Be My Master--Pull My Strings
You might not know this yet,
But I'm your twisted little marionette.
And you- My almighty puppeteer.
So, please...
Make me dance around on strings.
You are the possessor,
And I am the possessed.
Manipulate me,
Control me,
Use me,
Abuse me.
Please...
Bend me at your will.
I am the willing little slave,
And you- The master of my strings.
But I'm your twisted little marionette.
And you- My almighty puppeteer.
So, please...
Make me dance around on strings.
You are the possessor,
And I am the possessed.
Manipulate me,
Control me,
Use me,
Abuse me.
Please...
Bend me at your will.
I am the willing little slave,
And you- The master of my strings.
Published 17th Feb 2010
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18th Feb 2010 4:54am
I loved how the words flowed. Your words were a turn on too. Very nicely done.
19th Feb 2010 3:46am
I feel that this image is a really common one, so to make it work you have to construct it really well. I mean, you do ask to be manipulated here, which is somewhat unexpected, but a lot of the language seems really well worn. For example, the phrase "dance around on strings" seems really common, and the use/abuse rhyme isn't anything new. I just feel that this image has so much potential and you don't really explore the possibilities here.
19th Feb 2010 4:07am
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