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The Old School

Round the granite dressed Carr Academy              
in right grandly titled Woodhouse hill road,            
a host of terraced houses neighbourly              
nestled, back-to-back, side-by-side and dozed...              
              
On lift of latch, brass-bell of Ramsden's shop            
would clang, to tell folk shop might make a sale,              
and growl of steel clad wheels and sharp clip-clop              
as brewer's dray, carted Bay Horse some ales.              
                
But come four-of-the-clock great clamour screamed              
as bairns tight-sprung sprang out from all restraints,            
double doors blew apart and out would stream              
flashing legs seeking Ma, to air their 'plaints.            
                
Then at ten-o-clock flax-mill hooter moaned              
Freeing workers to trudge, their cold road home.
Written by Rew
Published | Edited 11th Feb 2024
Author's Note
As my grandma's old school nears 150. Bay horse still exists.
Ramsden's shop long gone back-to-backs long gone
Flax mill still stands but just an empty shell.
1500 women worked there in hard labour, day by day
in shifts from 5 am to 10 pm. Photo from the " Festival of Britain " flyby of 1952 and now in the public domain. We are All part of social history...
if the wording seems archaic that's because it's old school lol.
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