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'24's At The Front Door
I wanna erase the pain revolving around my cerebellum
Reflecting a time of peace like an antebellum
The serum, unlike red rum, is my creativity
Waving the white flag when writing poetry
Another year meets history as we're approaching 2024
Expeditiously escorting 2023 right outta the back door
I for sure don't want anymore of what '23 had to offer
Devising a plan for how I can add dollars to my coffer
I want my daughter and I to reestablish our bond
A bond that's floated away like lily pads in a pond
Want my marriage to rest upon a solid foundation
In need of a resurrection of love and far less frustration
Want my depression to be casted into the pits of HELL
Providing an elevation from the situations of which I fell
Don't want to feel this despair so I declare war in '24
If it brings anymore drama to my ailing mental core
Reflecting a time of peace like an antebellum
The serum, unlike red rum, is my creativity
Waving the white flag when writing poetry
Another year meets history as we're approaching 2024
Expeditiously escorting 2023 right outta the back door
I for sure don't want anymore of what '23 had to offer
Devising a plan for how I can add dollars to my coffer
I want my daughter and I to reestablish our bond
A bond that's floated away like lily pads in a pond
Want my marriage to rest upon a solid foundation
In need of a resurrection of love and far less frustration
Want my depression to be casted into the pits of HELL
Providing an elevation from the situations of which I fell
Don't want to feel this despair so I declare war in '24
If it brings anymore drama to my ailing mental core
Published 31st Dec 2023
Author's Note
For the "2024" comp.
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31st Dec 2023 12:14pm
Hope the new year brings you & yours happiness, good health & prosperity…
31st Dec 2023 8:53pm
31st Dec 2023 3:44pm
A very self reflecting muse, my King and I admired how you gave credence to your words to resonate such a beautiful thought within your message.
Enjoy your day and Happy New Year to you and yours.
Enjoy your day and Happy New Year to you and yours.
31st Dec 2023 8:55pm
1st Jan 2024 3:54pm
3rd Jan 2024 2:34pm
It’s one of the things many us would like to do with improving relationships. Totally relatable.
Great write sir. Happy New Year
Great write sir. Happy New Year
11th Jan 2024 9:15pm
You might as well invest in month after month of pain medication, because this year may be a headache.
Each resolution you've described has merit and shows strength of character and responsibility.
I hope you meet all of your expectations and experience a great new year
I hope you meet all of your expectations and experience a great new year
21st Jan 2024 12:58pm
Certainly agree with this one, Sir Damon
Nothing that remotely resembles the drama of last year should be allowed to thrive in your presence this year
Terminate on sight (and with extreme prejudice)
Nothing that remotely resembles the drama of last year should be allowed to thrive in your presence this year
Terminate on sight (and with extreme prejudice)
23rd Jan 2024 5:28am
