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The Machine is...2024 (Depressing Poem Warning)
The machine is
Hungry for money
Thirsty for blood
The machine is
The breathless immortal
Sniffing at your door
Screaming in the dark
The machine is
Born from the machine
Heart frozen
Soul washed
Mowing forests
Carving deserts
Leaving pits of filth
Toxic air
Toxic sea
Toxic land
Toxic animals
Belts of slaughter
Under Poison rain
Turning millions insane
The machine is
The mechanical vampire
Sucking on your fear
Draining time
The machine is
The bullet in the corpse
The explosion on the street
The cloud of blood dust
Hungry for money
Thirsty for blood
Published 29th Dec 2023
Author's Note
inspired by the self checkouts that eat your money
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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29th Dec 2023 8:58pm
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3rd Jan 2024 4:22pm
Thanks for reading
its a depressing subject
"World controllers are bastards" would have been my second choice for a title.
Regards
James
its a depressing subject
"World controllers are bastards" would have been my second choice for a title.
Regards
James
6th Jan 2024 5:24am
Ooo!
To me it sounds like lyrics of a metal song!
I can just hear the screams!!
<3
To me it sounds like lyrics of a metal song!
I can just hear the screams!!
<3
8th Jan 2024 1:14pm
Hi,
Thanks for your words of strength.
Yes I do love metal. I think I would have to rework some lines to make it fit a strong rhythm track. The idea is there. If a metal band wanted to have it they could buy it. your comment is very encouraging.
Regards
James
Thanks for your words of strength.
Yes I do love metal. I think I would have to rework some lines to make it fit a strong rhythm track. The idea is there. If a metal band wanted to have it they could buy it. your comment is very encouraging.
Regards
James
