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Illusive
I'm sending my spirit
out into the cosmos
seeking you illusive lady
with raven hair
clothed by the stars
words flow from your crimson lips
falling into my mind
wrapping me in your sweet cotton candy.
Sweetness adorned by razor sharp edges
cut me and slice me
the way I like it with
whispered truths
that only I can here
i've tried to keep you
but you belong to the ether.
I reach for you like a greedy child
a phene in need of a fix
i'm addicted to the ink
that spills from your lips
please feed my soul the words
it needs to be set free.
out into the cosmos
seeking you illusive lady
with raven hair
clothed by the stars
words flow from your crimson lips
falling into my mind
wrapping me in your sweet cotton candy.
Sweetness adorned by razor sharp edges
cut me and slice me
the way I like it with
whispered truths
that only I can here
i've tried to keep you
but you belong to the ether.
I reach for you like a greedy child
a phene in need of a fix
i'm addicted to the ink
that spills from your lips
please feed my soul the words
it needs to be set free.
Published 28th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2012 8:44am
Cotton candy does sound good! What an interesting piece crim! I think you could turn this into a short story with some more meat and potatoes!
28th Apr 2012 9:00am
Anonymous
28th Apr 2012 10:59am
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ty Christian for such a heartfelt comment inspiring me to keep writing..peace Crim :)
28th Apr 2012 2:18pm
This was awesome. It makes me wonder who inspired such a write . You're one of a kind my crim
ty Gg my illusive lady is my imaginary muse who feeds me words with which to create..though she is like some poets I know ;) Gg you rock!!! tough yet tender and simply beautiful..peace Crim :)
28th Apr 2012 4:33pm
a change for the better on the daily scale is needed
because we dont know if on this day pain will be repeated
so we must Look within our Souls and Greet It
It Is The Holy Ghost And With Him we can never be defeated....
because we dont know if on this day pain will be repeated
so we must Look within our Souls and Greet It
It Is The Holy Ghost And With Him we can never be defeated....
28th Apr 2012 5:18pm
28th Apr 2012 7:39pm
This is mesmerizing and beautiful...
"Sweetness adorned by razor sharp edges
cut me and slice me
the way I like it with
whispered truths
that only I can here
i've tried to keep you
but you belong to the ether."
Pure Prolificness!
"Sweetness adorned by razor sharp edges
cut me and slice me
the way I like it with
whispered truths
that only I can here
i've tried to keep you
but you belong to the ether."
Pure Prolificness!
28th Apr 2012 8:22pm
ty lovely lady..I always appreciate your comments putting a smile on my face..peace Crim :)
28th Apr 2012 10:20pm
28th Apr 2012 10:41pm
