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Fire & Desire
Beaded with sweat,
my skin feels so heavy.
With need, with greed,
and everything in between.
Desire pooling in the depths within me,
we can call it,
the sinking place, or better yet,
the syncing place.
Because when we come together,
it will seal our fate,
as we become one.
the fire in my eyes, matching yours,
your lust for me,
seeping through your pores..
two words, sheepishly leaving my lips,
"I'm yours."
as you take me....
- Poetic Gawdess
my skin feels so heavy.
With need, with greed,
and everything in between.
Desire pooling in the depths within me,
we can call it,
the sinking place, or better yet,
the syncing place.
Because when we come together,
it will seal our fate,
as we become one.
the fire in my eyes, matching yours,
your lust for me,
seeping through your pores..
two words, sheepishly leaving my lips,
"I'm yours."
as you take me....
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 22nd Dec 2023
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22nd Dec 2023 9:10pm
Well, that certainly heated up a winter day.
Keep those embers burning. Your lust and passion came through your words.
Keep those embers burning. Your lust and passion came through your words.
23rd Dec 2023 2:06am
Hi Leo! Thanks for the read and for also capturing my intentions for this piece. Much appreciated,
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
23rd Dec 2023 3:17am
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23rd Dec 2023 7:51am
23rd Dec 2023 8:06am
Hot enough to get the reader up on a cold winter day, echoing Da Vinci. A poem of mutual desire. Favourite lines:
Desire pooling in the depths within me,
we can call it,
the sinking place, or better yet,
the syncing place.
Because when we come together,
it will seal our fate,
as we become one.
the fire in my eyes, matching yours,
Desire pooling in the depths within me,
we can call it,
the sinking place, or better yet,
the syncing place.
Because when we come together,
it will seal our fate,
as we become one.
the fire in my eyes, matching yours,
23rd Dec 2023 12:54pm
Hello Sol, thank you so much for reading and sharing your insight!
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
23rd Dec 2023 12:13pm
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26th Dec 2023 5:44pm
Thank you so much for reading! Glad to help keep you guys warm on these cold days ;) I'm gonna go and check you out! Also thanks for the follow.
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
