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Dear DV,

Absolutely beautiful poem. I enjoyed the tenderness of the piece and the quiet love between two people. Lovely write. H🌷

Thank you so much Honoria. You are too kind, but I appreciate your thoughts and wisdom.

Three pointer and the foul

BIG LIKE

Replay to check if the toe was on the line. Appreciate the Big Like.

This poem is amazing.  Love is amazing.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
From: Keith Edward Baucum

And I enjoyed your comment. Thank-you.

Beautifully rendered sentiments that deeply touch me. I adore your immensely intimate and viscerally fresh construction and how it's boldness underscores each and every action as it gloriously welcomes every beautiful romantic reply.
Bravo, dear Leo.... Bravo.

-💙

Wow, as a humble novice poet, I couldn’t ask for a more encouraging analysis. That my words touched such an esteemed poetess is like winning a Pulitzer in poetry. 🏆🧾

Thank-you for your time to read and comment. It meant a lot. 🎉🥂

What an endearing caressing of words, my wandering poet.

Enjoy your upcoming week in all you do.

I will and hope you enjoy yours also.

Really happy you liked my words.

Philis it was my pleasure, and I am grateful for your comment.

OMG DaVinci, this positively squishes with soft romance.

Great job floating the emotions through the entire poem.

Thanks, Betty, for a wonderful comment. Very happy you enjoyed it and may you have many romantic "squishes".

Sure can. Thanks for the comment and RL add.

Oh how I love this

"When I put my arm around her waist  
She feels weightless."

To experience such a wonder, I love it.

LJ

LJ love hearing from you. Thank-you so much for the cool comment. I wish you "weightlessness" in your future.

-LD

This poem breathes such grace and tenderness.

"When I put my arm around her waist  
She feels weightless" > such amazing lines these are.

Enjoyed this write tremendeously :-)

You too made me smile with your comments. Thank-you so much for reaching and leaving a wonderful comment. Really glad you enjoyed the poem.

Basic romance
Beautiful expression
Filled with tenderness
And passion
Delights the eyes
And warms the heart

Leo, your poem is gorgeous! I love it's simplicity, smooth flow and endearing words! Well done, Leo!

Faith, thank you so much for the wonderful comment. 💙💚

Your poem is a real treasure!

This poem is full of beauty and passion.

Thank-you so much for the comment and the read.

Very beautiful poem, Leo! I love it!

A second comment, you must have liked it.  Thanks again Faith.

You say "basic romance". I say love.
These are all things we experience with love, without any of the b.s.

Very aptly put. Thanks for the read and insightful comment.

That's just super well written and relatable

Most thankful for your read and comment.  Hope the poem maintained dampness.

Thanks for the great comment, Brandy.  Your weakness may be a strength!  : )

It's such a beautiful bond.

LJ

2nd comment from you on this poem, you must like it. Thanks for the comment. Always a pleasure getting your feedback.

Haha Leo... i must.  I always love to leave comments on ppl who read me.  I didn't realize I'd read this bad boy before.

LJ

A beautiful and tender poem!

Your words capture the sweet, gentle moments of intimacy and connection between two people. The structure, using "When I..." and her reactions, creates a sense of simplicity and sincerity.

The imagery is delicate and evocative:

- "She smiles" and "She giggles" convey joy and playfulness.
- "She feels weightless" suggests a sense of freedom and release.
- "She is content" implies a deep satisfaction and happiness.
- "She presses into mine" and "She melts" describe a passionate and surrendering response.
- "I remain hers" is a beautiful expression of devotion and belonging.

Your poem celebrates the beauty of emotional and physical connection, highlighting the ways in which two people can make each other feel seen, loved, and cherished.

I think I know who to hire if I ever need a PR person.  Thank-you so much for your comprehensive comment and feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Delicate it is, care needed to maintain.

Beautiful written Leo, I felt every word❤️
Loves you Brother ❤️
Jackie xo

Thank you, Sis. Glad you enjoyed.

Absolutely touched me ❤️