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Palm Trees
There’s hope in white wine
How it pours into
Crystal cups swirling around
Like a gentle crisp hurricane
Waiting to be sipped
Washing away my insides
Stripping away my self doubt
With its bubbling tingles
As I sit on our front porch
With no make-up on Thanksgiving
In 65 degree Florida weather
By our small Palm Trees
With strung white lights
A tradition started two years ago
Our young skyscraper trunks
That continue to grow
Symbolic with its
Towering future of love
Flexible in raging
Storms and disagreements
That always seem to
Happen after midnight
Because it’s the law of love
To be addressed immediately
Waiting for morning
Is for wimps because
We love like hurricanes
At home with the rain
Still standing in the
Aftermath of climate and
Tangled bed sheets
Because we bend
Like devotion
Like Palm Trees
How it pours into
Crystal cups swirling around
Like a gentle crisp hurricane
Waiting to be sipped
Washing away my insides
Stripping away my self doubt
With its bubbling tingles
As I sit on our front porch
With no make-up on Thanksgiving
In 65 degree Florida weather
By our small Palm Trees
With strung white lights
A tradition started two years ago
Our young skyscraper trunks
That continue to grow
Symbolic with its
Towering future of love
Flexible in raging
Storms and disagreements
That always seem to
Happen after midnight
Because it’s the law of love
To be addressed immediately
Waiting for morning
Is for wimps because
We love like hurricanes
At home with the rain
Still standing in the
Aftermath of climate and
Tangled bed sheets
Because we bend
Like devotion
Like Palm Trees
Author's Note
What can I say - I'm an emotional creature -
and Mark handles it like a trooper!
listening to
Alt-J - U&ME
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=gFKhxi8b9SQ
and Mark handles it like a trooper!
listening to
Alt-J - U&ME
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=gFKhxi8b9SQ
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Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 1:53am
Still standing in the
Aftermath of climate and
Tangled bed sheets
Because we bend
Like devotion
Like Palm Trees
This is beautiful! I never saw the beauty in palm trees until after I left Arizona. But they're some tough, flexible trees!
Aftermath of climate and
Tangled bed sheets
Because we bend
Like devotion
Like Palm Trees
This is beautiful! I never saw the beauty in palm trees until after I left Arizona. But they're some tough, flexible trees!
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:16am
Hi Willow!
Thanks for that. I started this at his place then finished
editing once I got back home. We were drinking white wine. LOL
Red wine kills me for some reason. But I do love me some good
Sangria!
It makes me happy knowing you enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for stopping by for a read:)
Thanks for that. I started this at his place then finished
editing once I got back home. We were drinking white wine. LOL
Red wine kills me for some reason. But I do love me some good
Sangria!
It makes me happy knowing you enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for stopping by for a read:)
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 1:58am
hello beautiful Adelphina it's the only way to love
you guys are sexy together 💕
you guys are sexy together 💕
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:20am
Hi Crimsin:)
Thank you!
We strung some lights on his Palm Trees on the front porch.
And I went from there. I thought about how they bend during bad weather and how tall they grow just like relationships:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by for a read:)
Thank you!
We strung some lights on his Palm Trees on the front porch.
And I went from there. I thought about how they bend during bad weather and how tall they grow just like relationships:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by for a read:)
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 1:59am
Sounds like you are very much like the weather in everything you do but come to think of it, we all are. Nothing like a good storm to clear the air! Sorry... for the predictability. 😉
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:24am
Hey Billy!
We definitely cleared the air. hahaha
He's got a couple of small Palm Trees on his front
porch area that we put lights on. Just the trunks. Looks pretty!!
I'm glad you enjoyed this!!
Thanks for stopping by buddy:)
We definitely cleared the air. hahaha
He's got a couple of small Palm Trees on his front
porch area that we put lights on. Just the trunks. Looks pretty!!
I'm glad you enjoyed this!!
Thanks for stopping by buddy:)
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:02am
Yeah well I'm from the Groot family, so I got you babe! Bring on the hurricane! Some more. wahaha!
I love this write you know. And the little edits are perfect. I'm digging your vibes here. All the details that make me say yep, yep, and yep.
It's perfect. It's you!
I love this write you know. And the little edits are perfect. I'm digging your vibes here. All the details that make me say yep, yep, and yep.
It's perfect. It's you!
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:33am
Hey there honey!!
You are from the Groot family. LOL
I'm bringing it!! Be careful what you ask for big sexy. hehehe
I'll never forget that memory - stringing lights on your palm trees.
The white wine and jotting things down:)
I'm glad you approve! You were all in this write!!
Thanks for the RL too!!!
You are from the Groot family. LOL
I'm bringing it!! Be careful what you ask for big sexy. hehehe
I'll never forget that memory - stringing lights on your palm trees.
The white wine and jotting things down:)
I'm glad you approve! You were all in this write!!
Thanks for the RL too!!!
Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:41am
Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 2:44am
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 3:39am
If I were a snarky dude I say get a room already... but it seems like you did that long ago...
Great loving write
BIG
Great loving write
BIG
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 3:55am
Hey PS
I aged this a bit.
This was my first thanksgiving with Mark.
It's a great memory in my mind so I wanted to celebrate it
with some Palm Tree love.
I'm hopeful for the future so added a year. LOL
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
I aged this a bit.
This was my first thanksgiving with Mark.
It's a great memory in my mind so I wanted to celebrate it
with some Palm Tree love.
I'm hopeful for the future so added a year. LOL
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
Re. Palm Trees
Waiting for morning
Is for wimps because
We love like hurricanes
At home with the rain
I liked this very much...
Is for wimps because
We love like hurricanes
At home with the rain
I liked this very much...
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 4:01am
Hi Dimpy:)
It's one of my favorite too.
Thank you for that:)
We've had a couple of moments where we talked
things through in the middle of the night. We made a promise
not to go to bed angry - so midnight it is! Even if it's talking over
the phone:)
Thanks for stopping by - thanks for the read!
It's one of my favorite too.
Thank you for that:)
We've had a couple of moments where we talked
things through in the middle of the night. We made a promise
not to go to bed angry - so midnight it is! Even if it's talking over
the phone:)
Thanks for stopping by - thanks for the read!
Re: Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 4:09am
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 6:42am
Three cheers for midnight and the laws of love!
But of course...I am biased:)
But of course...I am biased:)
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
18th Dec 2023 1:08am
Hi MS:)
Thanks for that!
Laws of Love mister!!
Midnight's where it all goes down. hahaha
Thanks for your snaps on this amigo and the RL!
Thanks for that!
Laws of Love mister!!
Midnight's where it all goes down. hahaha
Thanks for your snaps on this amigo and the RL!
Re. Palm Trees
13th Dec 2023 6:30pm
Re: Re. Palm Trees
18th Dec 2023 1:09am
Hey Cisco:)
I'm digging in and writing when the mood strikes!
Same to you amigo!!
New Year - New Writes!
I'm digging in and writing when the mood strikes!
Same to you amigo!!
New Year - New Writes!
Re. Palm Trees
17th Dec 2023 10:15am
Re: Re. Palm Trees
Hi LJ!
We had a bottle of white wine and jotted things down at the kitchen table. Random words and phrases. But it was harder then I thought it would be. We kept messing with each others vibe up. hahaha
I'm glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for stopping for a read!
We had a bottle of white wine and jotted things down at the kitchen table. Random words and phrases. But it was harder then I thought it would be. We kept messing with each others vibe up. hahaha
I'm glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for stopping for a read!
Re. Palm Trees
18th Dec 2023 2:27am
Hello fellow emotional creature. I'm late in discovering your poetry, but glad i've found it now. This piece is unusually beautiful. Looking forward to reading more.
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Re: Re. Palm Trees
18th Dec 2023 2:38am
haha. Hello there!
No such thing as late. You're making you're grand entrance amiga:))
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
It just came to me - how tall they grow and flexible too.
Reminded me of relationships in a way.
Thank you so much for stopping by for a read:)
No such thing as late. You're making you're grand entrance amiga:))
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
It just came to me - how tall they grow and flexible too.
Reminded me of relationships in a way.
Thank you so much for stopping by for a read:)