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Words And Things
Who are you to criticize
What people say
The words they speak
Are the words they use
And the things they do
Are what they choose
Who are you to rush to judge
When you make mistakes too
People aren't perfect
And neither are you
Take it easy and breathe
Let other people be
What people say
The words they speak
Are the words they use
And the things they do
Are what they choose
Who are you to rush to judge
When you make mistakes too
People aren't perfect
And neither are you
Take it easy and breathe
Let other people be
Published 9th Dec 2023
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10th Dec 2023 00:18am
10th Dec 2023 8:57am
12th Dec 2023 5:07am
Dear F,
Argh! It’s as though you caught me red handed being me! 😏 now I have to play nice in the sand box. What a great write to make one stop and reflect on their behavior before they do something regrettable. I appreciated how you said this and the length of the write. Just enough words to make the point and that’s that. Wonderful piece. H🌷
Argh! It’s as though you caught me red handed being me! 😏 now I have to play nice in the sand box. What a great write to make one stop and reflect on their behavior before they do something regrettable. I appreciated how you said this and the length of the write. Just enough words to make the point and that’s that. Wonderful piece. H🌷
12th Dec 2023 10:26pm
Dear H,
I was writing this to somehow convey my dislike of how so many people are very judgemental and critical of others these days. Also, to remind myself I don't want to be like that because I can fall into that trap myself. I'm glad you got something meaningful out of it. As always, I appreciate your feedback so much.
F
I was writing this to somehow convey my dislike of how so many people are very judgemental and critical of others these days. Also, to remind myself I don't want to be like that because I can fall into that trap myself. I'm glad you got something meaningful out of it. As always, I appreciate your feedback so much.
F
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23rd Jan 2024 12:12pm
This is really good. Society is so overcritical of others these days.
