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Caveat Lector
aches the darkness
blithely unaware of its beauty
I gaze into the shadows
and see its internal storm
it winds around me
breathing smoke into my soul
succumbing to its need
it scribes desire on my flesh
we meld together as one
twining spirits collide
the victor rises
greeting you on parchement
you behold its face
seeking your passions
fascinated with human
it designs ways to captivate
craving your ardor
it spellbinds
one long last look then departs
taking a part of your shine with it
Published 7th Dec 2023
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7th Dec 2023 6:51pm
I took my chances and read it. Your style really brings a reader into a vision. It’s quite unique. Very emotional.
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7th Dec 2023 6:57pm
I really liked this, I think you could add more lines to this, it needs more.
7th Dec 2023 7:37pm
7th Dec 2023 9:22pm
This may be one of my fav poems you have written. I was sweetly possessed by your every word.
7th Dec 2023 11:03pm
Parchment line attracts me.
Similar to words on the embankment I sometimes talk about....
BIG
Similar to words on the embankment I sometimes talk about....
BIG
30th Dec 2023 8:54pm
"it designs ways to captivate
craving your ardor
it spellbinds"
Spellbinding indeed.
craving your ardor
it spellbinds"
Spellbinding indeed.
