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Ugliness Of The Virtual Beauty
i boldly stood on the massive boulder
Watching the small village that lies below
It seemed in the eye of the mystic seer
That time up here, is heavenly too slow
In the foggy streets, nestled houses in clusters
Leave nought to the narrowest peep to breathe
From whence chimneys smoke up very thick layers
Where the living ones, spend a narrow life so brief
With every step uphill the heaven's gates open
To the most jocund views, that earth can show
Those small brooks, rivers and grand mountain
A beauty piece of earth to let the inks flow
The sun, now takes a warm vertical zenith
And the shadows stealthily quit the shades
Effusely soaked in warmth, mother earth is lit
Time to stretch the feet, in the open glades
But,sadly do i mourn the lost life my folks spend
Like sheep, may be more less than dead-living
Whose only source of living is so miserable
That my hungry words can't find them food
Then, how should i recall those idyllic Romances
Those Keats, and Clares and Golden Olden wealth
When my only solace, is a book stolen long ago
From a book store to feed my eager romantic feel
Instead, i find a very hollow pit within, so deep to feed
When food is supposed to fill and refill that need
So dying while eating the words, is then far more
Comforting than real food that need money galore
Watching the small village that lies below
It seemed in the eye of the mystic seer
That time up here, is heavenly too slow
In the foggy streets, nestled houses in clusters
Leave nought to the narrowest peep to breathe
From whence chimneys smoke up very thick layers
Where the living ones, spend a narrow life so brief
With every step uphill the heaven's gates open
To the most jocund views, that earth can show
Those small brooks, rivers and grand mountain
A beauty piece of earth to let the inks flow
The sun, now takes a warm vertical zenith
And the shadows stealthily quit the shades
Effusely soaked in warmth, mother earth is lit
Time to stretch the feet, in the open glades
But,sadly do i mourn the lost life my folks spend
Like sheep, may be more less than dead-living
Whose only source of living is so miserable
That my hungry words can't find them food
Then, how should i recall those idyllic Romances
Those Keats, and Clares and Golden Olden wealth
When my only solace, is a book stolen long ago
From a book store to feed my eager romantic feel
Instead, i find a very hollow pit within, so deep to feed
When food is supposed to fill and refill that need
So dying while eating the words, is then far more
Comforting than real food that need money galore
Published 7th Dec 2023
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7th Dec 2023 9:20pm
8th Dec 2023 9:11am
Some times the words fail to portray my deep feelings, as the truth is far more unbelievable to just imagine.
there's strife in my life, as if i write bullets not words , where i live.
the words might also kill me taking a great risk to publish them..
thanks heaps my friend..
there's strife in my life, as if i write bullets not words , where i live.
the words might also kill me taking a great risk to publish them..
thanks heaps my friend..
8th Dec 2023 9:52am
The truth is far more unbelievable - I understand more than you know.....
Wishing you a great day!
I'm sorry for any struggles you are going through
Wishing you a great day!
I'm sorry for any struggles you are going through
Anonymous
7th Dec 2023 10:16pm
What an amazing voyage, beginning to end
Your presence warms the cold caves of the heart my friend...
Nice to see you here with such good feedback.
Your friend P.D
Nice to see you here with such good feedback.
Your friend P.D
8th Dec 2023 10:13am
''Some spots are only the tree that covers the forest.'' clothed in gold with asphalt in the mine core'...
Freedom to speak, freedom to travel, freedom to think...freedom to live..are only poetry..and dreams.
Freedom to speak, freedom to travel, freedom to think...freedom to live..are only poetry..and dreams.
9th Dec 2023 8:08pm
If the guess is about my English, i humbly make it known that English is my 4th languguage after Arabic, French, and Amazigh.So i am,''let's say '' a self-taught learner and writer. while my foresmost hobby, and vocation is simply making sat receivers' software and informatique...on other hand, i am a music-mad person .
So, Your guess is right, being born in Arabic moslim country and spending the whole life inside its '' walls '',,, can't make of me,a yankee.citizen.or a Keats or Kafka....that '' i am not an English native speaker '' so i strive to write standard English spiced with some idiomatic stuff for my respectful readers, hope that those geographical barriers never stand against udnerstanding ech other....Hope you are illuminated my dear friend..
Thanks for your reading my humble words.dera friend Rew
ps/ i can write in 3 languages beside ''Eng''
So, Your guess is right, being born in Arabic moslim country and spending the whole life inside its '' walls '',,, can't make of me,a yankee.citizen.or a Keats or Kafka....that '' i am not an English native speaker '' so i strive to write standard English spiced with some idiomatic stuff for my respectful readers, hope that those geographical barriers never stand against udnerstanding ech other....Hope you are illuminated my dear friend..
Thanks for your reading my humble words.dera friend Rew
ps/ i can write in 3 languages beside ''Eng''
10th Dec 2023 12:14pm
10th Dec 2023 12:17pm
Clever with words? may be,
i prefer intelligent, cause i am chameleon. if you agree.
thanks Rew my dear friend
i prefer intelligent, cause i am chameleon. if you agree.
thanks Rew my dear friend
