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INVITATION ACCEPTED.....
My invitation is accepted,
Nothing you can do is excepted,
Your triumphal entry expected
when you're sufficiently erected
(and with condom duly protected)
for our bodies to be connected
when into me it is projected.....
I trust next day I'll be respected.
Nothing you can do is excepted,
Your triumphal entry expected
when you're sufficiently erected
(and with condom duly protected)
for our bodies to be connected
when into me it is projected.....
I trust next day I'll be respected.
Published 5th Dec 2023
Author's Note
Inspired by Trillium's poem Lover's Invitation and its accompanying picture. The poem was originally a rhyming caption to the picture that I posted in my comment, It has grown a few more lines since..
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Anonymous
5th Dec 2023 7:11am
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5th Dec 2023 2:21pm
Dear S,
I am glad you found inspiration in my work! This is a great compliment. The rhyming in your work adds a bit of fun - I tend to be a bit too serious.
Favourite line “and with condom duly protected”. It is not often that safe sex makes it into erotica. 😃
I am glad you found inspiration in my work! This is a great compliment. The rhyming in your work adds a bit of fun - I tend to be a bit too serious.
Favourite line “and with condom duly protected”. It is not often that safe sex makes it into erotica. 😃
25th Apr 2024 8:19am
9th Dec 2023 3:29am
Cute! Your meter count is right on, too. The rhymes all mesh well.
Good job here.
Good job here.
9th Dec 2023 6:59am
11th Dec 2023 6:54pm
I do not know how with the brevity of your words; you seem to impact your canvas as portrait painted.
I like the softness of this musing, my wise poet, in addition, please continue to enjoy your evening in the UK.
I like the softness of this musing, my wise poet, in addition, please continue to enjoy your evening in the UK.
