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Heartbeat - trying to write a Blackpink song
I never thought I could fall in love, was the furthest thing from my reality
I never bought into fairy tales, relationships built on emotional frailties
I'd look upward to those flickering stars in the skies
And try as I might, they'd put no romance in my eyes
Men buying my drinks, I'd cheer as they sank in flames
I'd put another charm on my bracelet and cross off their names
Never saw the sincerity, they were destined to fail
Deep down I resisted and put them through hell
Never expecting some prince would place me on his personal throne
And I never saw a hint of it until you came along...
::Chorus::
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Thump Thump... Thump Thump
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
You can hear my heartbeat ever so loud
You can feel the bass booming over the crowd
I can be vulnerable, it's allowed
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Easiest thing to do would be hide my feelings inside
You're the first I've found worthy to be by my side
I don't know if we can make it but I'm willing to try
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
I'm not expecting a happily ever after, no that's not even on my mind
But I don't want to always have regrets for some happiness I left behind
The moon is full and still the stars are shining bright
I don't want to stay numb to my feelings without putting up a fight
If you're the right one then It's OK if you stay
If you're not, then I'll just push you away
::chorus::
(Rap?)
Put on my boxing gloves
Fighting for a true love
And it's you I'm thinking of
Most fall on a 10 count
They're the ones that I can live without
Those ships heading south
I'm looking for you to stand beside me
Shoulder to shoulder, not one who'll hide behind me
Don't need anyone who'll bind me
I need you to hold me when I need it
When my ego gets low, you'll feed it
I need you to need me like I need you
::chorus::
I never bought into fairy tales, relationships built on emotional frailties
I'd look upward to those flickering stars in the skies
And try as I might, they'd put no romance in my eyes
Men buying my drinks, I'd cheer as they sank in flames
I'd put another charm on my bracelet and cross off their names
Never saw the sincerity, they were destined to fail
Deep down I resisted and put them through hell
Never expecting some prince would place me on his personal throne
And I never saw a hint of it until you came along...
::Chorus::
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Thump Thump... Thump Thump
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
You can hear my heartbeat ever so loud
You can feel the bass booming over the crowd
I can be vulnerable, it's allowed
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thumpity Thumpity Thump Thump Thump
Easiest thing to do would be hide my feelings inside
You're the first I've found worthy to be by my side
I don't know if we can make it but I'm willing to try
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
Thump Thump... Thump Thump...
I'm not expecting a happily ever after, no that's not even on my mind
But I don't want to always have regrets for some happiness I left behind
The moon is full and still the stars are shining bright
I don't want to stay numb to my feelings without putting up a fight
If you're the right one then It's OK if you stay
If you're not, then I'll just push you away
::chorus::
(Rap?)
Put on my boxing gloves
Fighting for a true love
And it's you I'm thinking of
Most fall on a 10 count
They're the ones that I can live without
Those ships heading south
I'm looking for you to stand beside me
Shoulder to shoulder, not one who'll hide behind me
Don't need anyone who'll bind me
I need you to hold me when I need it
When my ego gets low, you'll feed it
I need you to need me like I need you
::chorus::
Published 4th Dec 2023
Author's Note
My attempt at a song for Blackpink. They are a K-pop group with a specific style, and I don't do Korean, so this would be more for an American version of the group. It's unfinished, as I'm sure they would want changes and I'm fine with that. I threw in a simple rap, but I didn't spend a lot of time on that, and rap is not my strong suit.
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9th Dec 2023 2:51am
Truly enjoyed the rhythm in the words.
The chorus sounds fun to sing. It all does honestly.
Best of luck!
The chorus sounds fun to sing. It all does honestly.
Best of luck!
9th Dec 2023 5:18am
It would be nice, but I've not submitted it. I'm an old man writing songs for my pleasure only. Wish I'd started sooner, then I'd have the energy for failure. lol.
I really love everything about this song. You outdid yourself! I applaud you.
10th Dec 2023 6:27pm
Thanks.
They probably wouldn't do a love song, as a k-pop girl group they have kind of a fierce, kind of anti men relationship with their fans, but if they did do one, I think this one would be possible.
They probably wouldn't do a love song, as a k-pop girl group they have kind of a fierce, kind of anti men relationship with their fans, but if they did do one, I think this one would be possible.
10th Dec 2023 8:46pm
