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slut
When you told me
your body-count
I laughed.
Nobody’s a bigger
slut
than a woman
seeking
revenge
against men
against the world
against (myself)
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Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 6:08am
Dear B,
That’s just it isn’t it? Seeking revenge against myself. You’ve just knocked a great deal of sense into my head for a current situation and that has just released a whole load of toxic nonsense out of my over stuffed crazy mind. Thank you. And great write! So much truth in this piece. H🌷
That’s just it isn’t it? Seeking revenge against myself. You’ve just knocked a great deal of sense into my head for a current situation and that has just released a whole load of toxic nonsense out of my over stuffed crazy mind. Thank you. And great write! So much truth in this piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 1:13pm
All the bad shit is built in self loathing. All of it. And ‘fuck then’ comes back as ‘fuck me.’
Ugh.
I hope your situation clears up my friend. You are lovely and I hope the revenge is served cold, fast and in small portions very infrequently.
Re: Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 1:11pm
Re: Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 1:49pm
Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 1:18pm
Insightful piece into your feminine inner thoughts. "Revenge ....against (myself)", the quandary of your perception of what you are versus what you think you should be.
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Re: Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 4:55pm
Re. slut
There you go again
serving up that raw uncut.
I find this vibe to be very inspirational
serving up that raw uncut.
I find this vibe to be very inspirational
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Re: Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 4:55pm
Thanks Naj. I only rawdog my thoughts. If they make brain condoms I wouldn’t use them. 😜
Re. slut
3rd Dec 2023 8:50pm
Re. slut
Anonymous
6th Dec 2023 10:25am
I like the use of the phrase body-count. It reaffirms this idea that we die in it a little bit ourselves. And I’m fairly sure that’s the needlepoint of this page for me.
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Re: Re. slut
7th Dec 2023 2:12am
Thanks Goya. I think you do lose some vital part with each new body.
Which explains why so many people walk through life utterly hollow.
B
Which explains why so many people walk through life utterly hollow.
B