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passionate love
it's
cold
blustery
evening
n I wanna scream..
yes..
oh yes...
yeah...
cold
blustery
evening
n I wanna scream..
yes..
oh yes...
yeah...
Published 1st Dec 2023
Author's Note
I'm being naughty on completed 200 poetry... Thanks very much to all who always read me..
Love you❤
Love you❤
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You want to be screaming those words I suspect in the arms of a lover while the storm roars around. (Was partly thinking also of the noisy imitation orgasm scene by Meg Ryan in the 1990s movie When Harry Met Sally.)
Reading your footnote, I feel you have come quite a way with your erotic fuelled verse. The feeling is mutual.
Reading your footnote, I feel you have come quite a way with your erotic fuelled verse. The feeling is mutual.
1st Dec 2023 3:53pm
Hey SS
you got it absolutely right… I want to scream all these words while in his arms…n yaaa I'm so happy that I'm here n am satisfied with all my writing including erotica.. Well thanks a lot..
you got it absolutely right… I want to scream all these words while in his arms…n yaaa I'm so happy that I'm here n am satisfied with all my writing including erotica.. Well thanks a lot..
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2nd Dec 2023 1:43pm
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2nd Dec 2023 11:56pm
When it's cold you and me next to a cozy fire making sweet sweet love making sure you have orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
3rd Dec 2023 5:23am
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4th Jul 2024 7:36pm
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5th Jul 2024 3:11am
