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Last Cigarette and Blindfold
Drinking by the well
I've tossed hundreds of wishes
Fed the fates every penny I could find
Thinking all is well
I've prayed thousands of times
The only answer was losing my mind
One more step
Just one more step
Smoking one last time
I've died so many ways and here I am
Not that you cared when I was alive
Writing one last rhyme
Remembering the faces, flash like a shot
Straight through the brain and out my eyes
One more step
One last step
I've tossed hundreds of wishes
Fed the fates every penny I could find
Thinking all is well
I've prayed thousands of times
The only answer was losing my mind
One more step
Just one more step
Smoking one last time
I've died so many ways and here I am
Not that you cared when I was alive
Writing one last rhyme
Remembering the faces, flash like a shot
Straight through the brain and out my eyes
One more step
One last step
Published 28th Nov 2023
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29th Nov 2023 4:36am
Dear RMV,
A somber poem that reflects well those final thoughts well written. You pull the reader into a reflective mindset that can be relatable when there is a mix of outside influences. H🌷
A somber poem that reflects well those final thoughts well written. You pull the reader into a reflective mindset that can be relatable when there is a mix of outside influences. H🌷
