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Re. Smoke.
23rd Nov 2023 00:07am
There's nothing wrong with your arithmetic in this one, Luna 🙃.
There's nothing wrong with the poetry, either.
I can smell the sweet scent of that smoke in every word. Lovely. 💐
There's nothing wrong with the poetry, either.
I can smell the sweet scent of that smoke in every word. Lovely. 💐
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Re: Re. Smoke.
23rd Nov 2023 00:09am
Re. Smoke.
23rd Nov 2023 4:08am
Such a flawless haiku. I love it. You create an atmosphere with such few words.
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Re. Smoke.
23rd Nov 2023 6:00am
Dear L,
You are the master of writing poems and stories that captivate and mesmerize. The adjectives create such a fabulous sense of scent and vision. Such a glorious piece. H🌷
You are the master of writing poems and stories that captivate and mesmerize. The adjectives create such a fabulous sense of scent and vision. Such a glorious piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Smoke.
27th Nov 2023 00:21am
Re. Smoke.
23rd Nov 2023 12:23pm
No doubt, that pine and coniferous plants incense the air and embalm the heart with so much happiness and serenity, If only we keep this habit last long :!
Stay happy Luna.
Stay happy Luna.
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Re. Smoke.
27th Nov 2023 10:35pm
Re. Smoke.
29th Nov 2023 8:29pm
Lovely haiku. I love to stare into the smoke. I’m a white sage guy myself. Really beautiful work.
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Re: Re. Smoke.
29th Nov 2023 10:34pm
I love to stare into the smoke, too. It’s so meditative to watch it dance and sway. Thank you so much for reading ☺️
Re. Smoke.
30th Nov 2023 10:30am
Hold and release.... I love that part.
Face to face with some situation, just hold your breathe, inhale deeply and release...
Thank you.
Face to face with some situation, just hold your breathe, inhale deeply and release...
Thank you.
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26th Dec 2023 2:46pm
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26th Dec 2023 7:07pm
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