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Ashley Darque
I was respectful
Or at least so I thought
Maybe I caught him in a midlife crisis
Maybe he should not have
Referred to me as Isis
In his dreams
Silly him
Is it my fault that his wife
Was ear hustling while he slept?
Listened closely as he snitched on himself
While he crept along my back alley
Sighhhh..
I'm not much into victimhood politics
People make choices
Choices have consequences
He just needed put an 'H' on his back
And just handle it
It was his choice
To allow my consequence to
Suck him into oblivion
To let him film how my sexy low rider glided
Up and down his amusement slide
I'm no homewrecker
I have absolutely no desire to
Usurp her position
No dearie
I'm the sundown chick
The after dark diva
She can come in through the front door
And cos play house wife
All she wants
Because no matter what she does
To mitigate my presence
He'll always be peeping out the back door
Waiting for me to spin the block
One more time
Or at least so I thought
Maybe I caught him in a midlife crisis
Maybe he should not have
Referred to me as Isis
In his dreams
Silly him
Is it my fault that his wife
Was ear hustling while he slept?
Listened closely as he snitched on himself
While he crept along my back alley
Sighhhh..
I'm not much into victimhood politics
People make choices
Choices have consequences
He just needed put an 'H' on his back
And just handle it
It was his choice
To allow my consequence to
Suck him into oblivion
To let him film how my sexy low rider glided
Up and down his amusement slide
I'm no homewrecker
I have absolutely no desire to
Usurp her position
No dearie
I'm the sundown chick
The after dark diva
She can come in through the front door
And cos play house wife
All she wants
Because no matter what she does
To mitigate my presence
He'll always be peeping out the back door
Waiting for me to spin the block
One more time
Published 16th Nov 2023
| Edited 17th Nov 2023
Author's Note
My alter ego...
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16th Nov 2023 8:31pm
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17th Nov 2023 2:55am
Yesss!! This comment made my night!! 😅😅
Thank you so much and adding it to your RL my lovely.
Thank you so much and adding it to your RL my lovely.
17th Nov 2023 1:50am
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17th Nov 2023 12:11pm
Hoi hoi
Slowly but surely you pulled me into your story. Very clever write.
One thing though, if I may.
He, being married (or having made promises) with her, is a contract you were no part of. So how they go about it settling or ruining it all, is none of your business. Seems like a cold opinion, but I have only warm feelings about this. You cannot possibly carry the weight of the whole world on your shoulders.
It’s just an opinion, but it’s mine. And I like your poem very much.
Kind regards, Gus
Slowly but surely you pulled me into your story. Very clever write.
One thing though, if I may.
He, being married (or having made promises) with her, is a contract you were no part of. So how they go about it settling or ruining it all, is none of your business. Seems like a cold opinion, but I have only warm feelings about this. You cannot possibly carry the weight of the whole world on your shoulders.
It’s just an opinion, but it’s mine. And I like your poem very much.
Kind regards, Gus
You're right Gus. She is cold but she's always been clear and honest with her intentions. How his marriage goes has nothing to do with her indeed. She's a seductress plain and simple. The weight of the world has never been her issue. This is how my alter ego moves.
This poem is about the man balancing his own salacious desires and his family life. I've seen situations like this play out in real time again and again. Men are lovely but too often they lose focus.
Thank you very much for your thought provoking commentary. You were respectful insightful and engaging.
I like that a lot.
Enoy your day
Thia
This poem is about the man balancing his own salacious desires and his family life. I've seen situations like this play out in real time again and again. Men are lovely but too often they lose focus.
Thank you very much for your thought provoking commentary. You were respectful insightful and engaging.
I like that a lot.
Enoy your day
Thia
17th Nov 2023 9:57pm
Wow...from the pic all the way through the last light, this one moved with flaming feet!
18th Nov 2023 11:34pm
