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Some Women Like Me
Some women like me give themselves too easily
Some women like me sometimes behave indecently
Of these sins I've confessed often and fervently
But each time I fuck, I fuck happily
Some women like me sometimes behave indecently
Of these sins I've confessed often and fervently
But each time I fuck, I fuck happily
Published 13th Nov 2023
| Edited 14th Nov 2023
Author's Note
Playing with words. This little poem was prompted by a comment from a reader that held a slight tone of judgment. I'm no saint. I could blame my father's abuse, my mother's patterns of living, or my youthful indiscretions, but I accept responsibility for my shortcomings. Pic is edited heavily from a selfie.
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13th Nov 2023 1:28pm
13th Nov 2023 2:08pm
We are not saints. I can blame society, or family lifestyles. Our reckless actions in our youth resulted from not being guided and exploited by our instincts.
But we take responsibility for our shortcomings.
The realism of your writing penetrates my feelings, as it is very frank, and who among us has not committed a sin one day
But we take responsibility for our shortcomings.
The realism of your writing penetrates my feelings, as it is very frank, and who among us has not committed a sin one day
I respect your frank realism and liked the way the poem rhymes. The title did remind me of the Little Mix song '"A Woman Like Me" (LM are a British group, findable on youtube.)
14th Nov 2023 2:20pm
14th Nov 2023 3:58pm
ALWAYS better to be authentically yourself than a second-rate version of somebody else, Love. 😘
16th Nov 2023 11:12am
