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SoulMate
SoulMate
Pictures of You,
in my mind,
oh so clear,
I remember the
twists in your
hair
King Leo,I/'/m the Only
Queen of
your Lair
Our Love
it is
Broken
In need of
Repair
Without you
my Soulis
in the
Depths of Despair,
My heart seems
to Rip&Tear
meat done
Rare,
For this
Passion you
are so
unprepared,i/'/ll leave
you
Shaking&
Scared
We cant act
like We
Never Cared,,,,,
You are my
SoulMate,
To this my
Life I/'/ll
Swear...........
Pictures of You,
in my mind,
oh so clear,
I remember the
twists in your
hair
King Leo,I/'/m the Only
Queen of
your Lair
Our Love
it is
Broken
In need of
Repair
Without you
my Soulis
in the
Depths of Despair,
My heart seems
to Rip&Tear
meat done
Rare,
For this
Passion you
are so
unprepared,i/'/ll leave
you
Shaking&
Scared
We cant act
like We
Never Cared,,,,,
You are my
SoulMate,
To this my
Life I/'/ll
Swear...........
Published 29th Oct 2023
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This poem seems to express intense emotions surrounding a romantic relationship, possibly one that has encountered difficulties or has ended. The repetition of "SoulMate" emphasizes the depth of connection felt between the speaker and their partner. The imagery of memories and longing portrayed through phrases like "Pictures of You, in my mind" and "twists in your hair" adds a sense of nostalgia and yearning.
The mention of "King Leo" and "Queen of your Lair" suggests a dynamic of power and intimacy within the relationship, while the acknowledgment of love being "Broken" and "in need of Repair" reflects the challenges and struggles faced.
The use of metaphors such as "my Soul is in the Depths of Despair" and "my heart seems to Rip & Tear" vividly portrays the speaker's anguish and sense of loss. The poem also seems to convey a sense of empowerment towards the end, with the declaration of independence and determination to move forward, despite the pain experienced.
Overall, it's a raw and emotive portrayal of love, loss, and the complexities of relationships.
The mention of "King Leo" and "Queen of your Lair" suggests a dynamic of power and intimacy within the relationship, while the acknowledgment of love being "Broken" and "in need of Repair" reflects the challenges and struggles faced.
The use of metaphors such as "my Soul is in the Depths of Despair" and "my heart seems to Rip & Tear" vividly portrays the speaker's anguish and sense of loss. The poem also seems to convey a sense of empowerment towards the end, with the declaration of independence and determination to move forward, despite the pain experienced.
Overall, it's a raw and emotive portrayal of love, loss, and the complexities of relationships.
