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One Type Of Ghostly Encounter
Jonathan saw some
blonde in the graveyard remove
her robe and faded away.
blonde in the graveyard remove
her robe and faded away.
Published 28th Oct 2023
Author's Note
This katauta poem describes one person's bizarre encounter one night at a certain place.
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28th Oct 2023 2:40pm
28th Oct 2023 6:56pm
28th Oct 2023 5:03pm
The way you wrote this implies that it's the observer who faded away (in terror?) rather than the ghost. If you intend to refer the ghost, the words should be "fade away".
28th Oct 2023 6:57pm
