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Beauty In Still
I threw a glance through the window
The moon was there, nestled in the air
Among the stars, within a misty halo
The time was calm like a flat eternity
Nothing affected its purity, its clarity
Like the moon, the sky is darkly clear
Its width reflects the void it quietly fills
The vastness in which how fast it spins
Then, i regained my seat, that hides the truth
The false space that hides any shade of proof
Where the moon is such a grandeur in heaven;
Even the mundane one; can but be Beauty-smitten
Into such rhyming scenery, be blindly driven
And to humans his admiration will be Poetry.
The moon was there, nestled in the air
Among the stars, within a misty halo
The time was calm like a flat eternity
Nothing affected its purity, its clarity
Like the moon, the sky is darkly clear
Its width reflects the void it quietly fills
The vastness in which how fast it spins
Then, i regained my seat, that hides the truth
The false space that hides any shade of proof
Where the moon is such a grandeur in heaven;
Even the mundane one; can but be Beauty-smitten
Into such rhyming scenery, be blindly driven
And to humans his admiration will be Poetry.
Published 26th Oct 2023
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27th Oct 2023 10:25am
Very dear P.D.,
It's an amazing poem. In every line of it, there is an image that creates a very vast world in which a lover of great poetry is lost. You are a great poet. You will be an admiration to every reader of your poetry. This is a marvelous poem. J.Z.
It's an amazing poem. In every line of it, there is an image that creates a very vast world in which a lover of great poetry is lost. You are a great poet. You will be an admiration to every reader of your poetry. This is a marvelous poem. J.Z.
Thank you my dear brother for your warm presence, and your genuine feedback,As i hope to be a read as a humble poet, i do wish as well a bright future for your pen to shine among the best ones,
Whoever is true to themselves, and to others, they never lose, they never fall.".they succeed in all. "
Stay blessed always. Blessed be your pen.
Whoever is true to themselves, and to others, they never lose, they never fall.".they succeed in all. "
Stay blessed always. Blessed be your pen.
