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Because You Loved Me, I am Alive.......(ver.1)
…...ten days flat on my back
I captured a fleeting glimpse of the pearly gates..... and I felt somehow
that I would not be coming back
And as beautiful as those heavenly gates appeared
nothing
beats
your
smile
the wind whispered your name
and I gently closed my eyes
and the thought of you tempted the fates
you “gave me the kiss of life”
and once again I am alive
and now “I'm coming back just to give you my love”
feeling the sublime warmth of sunshine,
awakened by the morning dew
holding you close
doing everything that I can do
to make you smile again
and make our love brand new
to loose the ties that bind
helping you leave the things that vex your soul
somewhere far behind
to hold you in my arms
to make you feel safe
pleasing your mind, body and soul
saved of your amazing grace
I love you
wrapped up in a sinewy abstract
of arms and legs
caught up between hips and thighs
gasping for breath
as the tears well up in the corners of our eyes
and rivers of waters flow
freely between the shores
across the bridge of sighs,
of intimacies where our love resides.............
….......forever, Amen
I captured a fleeting glimpse of the pearly gates..... and I felt somehow
that I would not be coming back
And as beautiful as those heavenly gates appeared
nothing
beats
your
smile
the wind whispered your name
and I gently closed my eyes
and the thought of you tempted the fates
you “gave me the kiss of life”
and once again I am alive
and now “I'm coming back just to give you my love”
feeling the sublime warmth of sunshine,
awakened by the morning dew
holding you close
doing everything that I can do
to make you smile again
and make our love brand new
to loose the ties that bind
helping you leave the things that vex your soul
somewhere far behind
to hold you in my arms
to make you feel safe
pleasing your mind, body and soul
saved of your amazing grace
I love you
wrapped up in a sinewy abstract
of arms and legs
caught up between hips and thighs
gasping for breath
as the tears well up in the corners of our eyes
and rivers of waters flow
freely between the shores
across the bridge of sighs,
of intimacies where our love resides.............
….......forever, Amen
Published 25th Oct 2023
Author's Note
........it was you, you bought me back and I thank you
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25th Oct 2023 6:13am
What better way to praise the woman who saved your life but show her the love of your revived body to hers..
Reading that stirred me to life!
Reading that stirred me to life!
25th Oct 2023 6:30am
Hoi hoi
Yes, I love this.
It reads like a prayer.
No better way to celebrate life and the woman you’re with.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
Yes, I love this.
It reads like a prayer.
No better way to celebrate life and the woman you’re with.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
26th Oct 2023 7:38pm
MrM,
the power of love
the power of love making
are powers truly magical
you have mixed them perfectly with that musical soul of yours.
enjoyed!
down2dirt
the power of love
the power of love making
are powers truly magical
you have mixed them perfectly with that musical soul of yours.
enjoyed!
down2dirt
