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Moonlight Hour
spent some time up on the coast
in the land of always been
up where the elk run among the cedars
the memory of your love in me
lake filled with pike
line full of hope
whispers through the trees
pain that was such a burden
sweat upon the brow
angry moonlight hour
water quenching thirst
ripples through my toes
as i stand along the shore
whatever i thought whatever i was
i am no more
in the land of always been
up where the elk run among the cedars
the memory of your love in me
lake filled with pike
line full of hope
whispers through the trees
pain that was such a burden
sweat upon the brow
angry moonlight hour
water quenching thirst
ripples through my toes
as i stand along the shore
whatever i thought whatever i was
i am no more
Written by
BatPowers
(Bat Powers)
Published 23rd Oct 2023
| Edited 9th Feb 2025
Author's Note
A poem of hope and moving on.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Oct 2023 3:11am
Dear BP,
I like that you’ve got a bit of hide and seek in this piece with figuring out the title. What caught my attention was the imagery you paint throughout the write. Terrific piece. H🌷
I like that you’ve got a bit of hide and seek in this piece with figuring out the title. What caught my attention was the imagery you paint throughout the write. Terrific piece. H🌷
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23rd Oct 2023 12:58pm
Thank you for taking a moment with it. I appreciate it.
Have a wonderful day H.
Bat
Have a wonderful day H.
Bat
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23rd Oct 2023 3:25am
hello dearest Bat I like the cryptic nature of this...this gave me chills I don't why perhaps your ending 💕
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23rd Oct 2023 1:00pm
Thank you crimsin. I'm hoping he just found a better way and didn't get lost . lol Have a good Monday
Bat
Bat
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2023 1:36am
Live? I enjoyed the imagery and the mystery in this one

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24th Oct 2023 12:46pm
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24th Oct 2023 12:48pm
Thank you PoetSpeak I appreciate it.
May your inkwell ink well. Have a good day.
Bat
May your inkwell ink well. Have a good day.
Bat
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24th Oct 2023 1:09pm
As a northern country girl, born & bred, I loved the way this took me back home again with your visuals. Nicely done!
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24th Oct 2023 1:24pm
Thank you WillowWhimsies, I'm glad it took you home. I appreciate the read. Hope you have a wonderful Tuesday.
Bat
Bat
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26th Oct 2023 4:32pm
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26th Oct 2023 4:52pm
Thanks for the read Thor_Azine. I appreciate it.
May your mind flow freely and may your ink fill your quill.
Bat
May your mind flow freely and may your ink fill your quill.
Bat
Re. Moonlight Hour
10th Feb 2025 3:48am