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Underbelly
I bludgeon you with love
Cut you
Bruise you
Lacerations
Then lovingly heal you
Pick your scabs
Pick your brain
Make you soup
Then
Start again
Cut you
Bruise you
Lacerations
Then lovingly heal you
Pick your scabs
Pick your brain
Make you soup
Then
Start again
Author's Note
Poetspeak is back and in your face ...
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2023 5:38pm
Love in all its forms! Nice write!
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20th Oct 2023 7:03pm
You get it Stoney
Like the mic
Just like dropping the soap in the shower...
Appreciate
Like the mic
Just like dropping the soap in the shower...
Appreciate
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20th Oct 2023 8:07pm
😂 that's about the results of how it goes 😂😁underbelly 👊 that made my day 🤣👊
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20th Oct 2023 10:52pm
OF COURSE NOT 👍 HELL I'M THE SAME WAY I RATHER BE HONEST THEN HOLD BACK WHAT I'M THINKING 😉 sometimes you gotta SHAKE IT UP EVEN JUST A LITTLE BIT 🌹😂😁👍
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20th Oct 2023 11:53pm
No, I don't leave anymore. Sometimes take a mini sabbatical when people piss me off but I'm not a quitter ...
I think you know that my awesome E !!
🖤💜💯
I think you know that my awesome E !!
🖤💜💯
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2023 00:29am
This is kind of perfect.
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21st Oct 2023 3:21am
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damn big bro, .
yeeaah, this that fire that many hasn't had the pleasure of
truly feeling .
wordless in the deep
yeeaah, this that fire that many hasn't had the pleasure of
truly feeling .
wordless in the deep
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21st Oct 2023 12:30pm
I so appreciate your phenomenal comment
PoH. I'm back with vigor
Dig the RL
STAY TUNED
PoH. I'm back with vigor
Dig the RL
STAY TUNED
Re. Underbelly
21st Oct 2023 12:45pm
🔥🔥🔥
There’s just something about…soup
I’m really digging all you’ve had to say as of late. Straight to the core and heart of the matter, the only way to be. Your response, “call me Direct Speak” to a comment on one of your poems was spot on. There’s no BS with you, I appreciate that.
Have a fantastic day.
There’s just something about…soup
I’m really digging all you’ve had to say as of late. Straight to the core and heart of the matter, the only way to be. Your response, “call me Direct Speak” to a comment on one of your poems was spot on. There’s no BS with you, I appreciate that.
Have a fantastic day.
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21st Oct 2023 2:07pm
Look, you're a New Yorker and I'm a New Yorker. Miles separate but it's the same vibe. New Yorkers don't mince words, you say it directly and fast because if you don't someone is already disagreeing with you and trying to get THEIR point across. There's humor in direct speak too.
We are a good breed.
Appreciate your take on my recent spills.
I'm just bring the fire power now with no gun needed. We'll use the gun later for some kind of weird sex. Long barrel stuff.
Appreciate you Mary
Thanks
We are a good breed.
Appreciate your take on my recent spills.
I'm just bring the fire power now with no gun needed. We'll use the gun later for some kind of weird sex. Long barrel stuff.
Appreciate you Mary
Thanks
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23rd Oct 2023 2:53am
Once you write, you always write
It's a code or or something
Ya know ??
Thx yo
It's a code or or something
Ya know ??
Thx yo
Re. Underbelly
28th Oct 2023 9:02am
Wow this was a popular comment thread, I’m thinking because it also feels instinctive, like our ancestors
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28th Oct 2023 12:56pm
Yeah, this one got the flock talking...
We are all one as it has been said ...
Thx W
We are all one as it has been said ...
Thx W