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The Scorpion King
You had me at a sweet disadvantage
When you blazed the celestial element of time
Riding into my life on a dream
The master key you twist in me
Unlocking the inner being of yourself
Asunder of my heart in flight
Mind above the kindred allure of the moon
Serenading my temple as the chasm of my soul await in spirit
Tendered emotions not for sale
To be placed on recall or retail
A hushed mind, a closed mouth, can never forsake things meant not to assail
Palming those robust elements of you
Holding the earthly components of its veracity to my heart
Stroking the ambience of his intellect
Keeping me sedated with desires, my name shrouded on his lips in rapture
Closing my eyes to the silhouette of his aura as I last see
Attuned bodies we meet on the winds of destiny
His temple taking my willing passion in subliminal wisps of fate
My soft Chi sinking as he embeds the fluidity of his creed
Kismet Karma embraced
Breathless, worshipping in the surrendering moment of time
Stroking the holiness of the woman for which I lay unto him
For the man for which he still resides deep inside me
Stealing his heart, softly caressing his mind
When you blazed the celestial element of time
Riding into my life on a dream
The master key you twist in me
Unlocking the inner being of yourself
Asunder of my heart in flight
Mind above the kindred allure of the moon
Serenading my temple as the chasm of my soul await in spirit
Tendered emotions not for sale
To be placed on recall or retail
A hushed mind, a closed mouth, can never forsake things meant not to assail
Palming those robust elements of you
Holding the earthly components of its veracity to my heart
Stroking the ambience of his intellect
Keeping me sedated with desires, my name shrouded on his lips in rapture
Closing my eyes to the silhouette of his aura as I last see
Attuned bodies we meet on the winds of destiny
His temple taking my willing passion in subliminal wisps of fate
My soft Chi sinking as he embeds the fluidity of his creed
Kismet Karma embraced
Breathless, worshipping in the surrendering moment of time
Stroking the holiness of the woman for which I lay unto him
For the man for which he still resides deep inside me
Stealing his heart, softly caressing his mind
Published 18th Oct 2023
| Edited 15th Oct 2024
Author's Note
It is just something about the enigma of his blessed soul
SKC
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This stanza my dear friend is the heart of this spill
The master key you twist in me
Unlocking the inner being of yourself
Asunder of my heart in flight
Mind above the kindred allure of the monn
Serenading my temple as the chasm of my soul await in spirit
Tendered emotions not for sale
To be placed on recall or retail
A hushed mind, a closed mouth, can never forsake things meant not to assail
Palming those robust elements of you
Holding the earthly components of its veracity to my heart
The master key you twist in me
Unlocking the inner being of yourself
Asunder of my heart in flight
Mind above the kindred allure of the monn
Serenading my temple as the chasm of my soul await in spirit
Tendered emotions not for sale
To be placed on recall or retail
A hushed mind, a closed mouth, can never forsake things meant not to assail
Palming those robust elements of you
Holding the earthly components of its veracity to my heart
19th Oct 2023 2:19am
Damn that stinger! You done got stung!
What a great mix of tender and mature descriptive wording in your poem. I like reading tribute type poems, because it also reflects back on the view of the writer, as well as the subject. There's never enough mature affection written in here, so thanks for adding to it.
Awesome write.
What a great mix of tender and mature descriptive wording in your poem. I like reading tribute type poems, because it also reflects back on the view of the writer, as well as the subject. There's never enough mature affection written in here, so thanks for adding to it.
Awesome write.
19th Oct 2023 2:35am
He's stinging you with his love. I'm burning inside with love. Keep on writing my Queen.
19th Oct 2023 5:09am
My Queen this has me sailing on a ocean of passion,canoeing down a river of love. Burning with fire and desire, feeling a love that could never be quenched or tire, no matter what stage it's on, you feel me with passion so strong. Your words have me hearing, the flutter wings of birds. Thoughts of you and this King slumber is disturb. Tonight close to my heart I will hold this poem tight. Make love to it until the dawing of light. I am at a new height. The Scorpian King these words my heart would recite. I am on a moutain top And my Queen is sight. My Quueen you are so deserving. I could not just leave a comment with no sustenance. You deserve a feast fit for a Queen.
20th Oct 2023 3:01am
29th Oct 2023 11:05pm
When the stinger does not debilitate you; but makes you stronger. The King has found his Queen.
2nd Jan 2024 4:08am
Kismet Karma embraced - two rare combination if together - nothing can stop it to surmise.
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
