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Mother of Bones
There it is
The moon
Up high
Suspended
For what seems like years
Before it goes down
Being swallowed
Like medication
So many moon pills
The same color of skeletons
I’ve held in the
Palm of my hand
Miniature in comparison
Resembling the river stones
Embedded in my freshwater veins
The perfect remedy
To help me sleep
And continue to spin
Towards the next day
Towards the sun
My blazing vitamin
Who I absorb daily
Warming all the
Variety of bones
I’ve been entrusted with
And had no choice
But to swallow
There’s no one left
No laughter in the streets
No children's scurrying feet
I’m devoid of life
Waiting
Patiently
For that vitamin in
The sky to finally decide
To burn the past down in a
Blaze of reckoning
In the most unforgiving manner
I will cease to exist
And still
I turn
With care
Like an old
Grandmother clock
Keeping watch
And time
Lovingly
Devotedly
And utterly alone
As a Mother of Bones
The moon
Up high
Suspended
For what seems like years
Before it goes down
Being swallowed
Like medication
So many moon pills
The same color of skeletons
I’ve held in the
Palm of my hand
Miniature in comparison
Resembling the river stones
Embedded in my freshwater veins
The perfect remedy
To help me sleep
And continue to spin
Towards the next day
Towards the sun
My blazing vitamin
Who I absorb daily
Warming all the
Variety of bones
I’ve been entrusted with
And had no choice
But to swallow
There’s no one left
No laughter in the streets
No children's scurrying feet
I’m devoid of life
Waiting
Patiently
For that vitamin in
The sky to finally decide
To burn the past down in a
Blaze of reckoning
In the most unforgiving manner
I will cease to exist
And still
I turn
With care
Like an old
Grandmother clock
Keeping watch
And time
Lovingly
Devotedly
And utterly alone
As a Mother of Bones
Author's Note
Even through the worst of times mother earth keeps turning and aging.
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Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 10:32pm
That is one sexually charged title!
And I never thought of pills as being skeleton colored, but now I will never see them any other way.
A rivetingly osteologic (or osteomantic) read:)
And I never thought of pills as being skeleton colored, but now I will never see them any other way.
A rivetingly osteologic (or osteomantic) read:)
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 11:06pm
Hi Midnight:)
It's a twist on mother earth.
Sooner or later she'll be the mother of bones.
Who knows how long humanity will be here.
I could hear her talking to me. LOL
I had to write it down.
Thank you so much for the RL
I know they are a rarity nowadays!!
It's a twist on mother earth.
Sooner or later she'll be the mother of bones.
Who knows how long humanity will be here.
I could hear her talking to me. LOL
I had to write it down.
Thank you so much for the RL
I know they are a rarity nowadays!!
Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 11:21pm
Re: Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 11:55pm
Hi Ron
Thanks for the fantastic nod amigo!
and for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
Thanks for the fantastic nod amigo!
and for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
Re: Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 11:56pm
Re. Mother of Bones
15th Oct 2023 11:43pm
Dang lady. I will let you get more rest!
This write is such a cool approach to insomnia (to me, in a way) and the thoughts that crowd the pillow when we try to relax. Great imagery throughout this write, too. The earth will eventually envelope everything, again. How we spend our time is what matters, and how we perceive it, to write about.
Even your brain is beautiful. Yep, you're a keeper.
This write is such a cool approach to insomnia (to me, in a way) and the thoughts that crowd the pillow when we try to relax. Great imagery throughout this write, too. The earth will eventually envelope everything, again. How we spend our time is what matters, and how we perceive it, to write about.
Even your brain is beautiful. Yep, you're a keeper.
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
16th Oct 2023 00:03am
Hey mister!
Well aren't you a sweetheart to let me rest. hahaha
I didn't see the insomnia aspect to this! That's the great thing
about comments. I was just writing on how the earth keeps turning
even when everything is gone. She doesn't quit.
See - you are pretty smart too!
I'm keeping you!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!!
Woop Woop!
Well aren't you a sweetheart to let me rest. hahaha
I didn't see the insomnia aspect to this! That's the great thing
about comments. I was just writing on how the earth keeps turning
even when everything is gone. She doesn't quit.
See - you are pretty smart too!
I'm keeping you!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!!
Woop Woop!
Re. Mother of Bones
16th Oct 2023 00:10am
If we only cared for her as well as she cares for us...beautiful piece
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
16th Oct 2023 00:16am
Hello Willow:)
I wanted to write from her perspective.
How she never quit - even through the worst of times.
Until the bitter end - she was there doing her job:)
Thanks for the RL:)
I wanted to write from her perspective.
How she never quit - even through the worst of times.
Until the bitter end - she was there doing her job:)
Thanks for the RL:)
Re. Mother of Bones
17th Oct 2023 2:32am
Mother Earth needs to be taken care of. We need to keep the Earth clean. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
27th Oct 2023 00:59am
Hi Cisco!
She is resilient. She will find a way and adapt accordingly.
Mankind on the other hand - that's the question:)
Thanks for stopping by and reading amigo:)
She is resilient. She will find a way and adapt accordingly.
Mankind on the other hand - that's the question:)
Thanks for stopping by and reading amigo:)
Re. Mother of Bones
Anonymous
17th Oct 2023 2:02pm
She's got us. And you captured her essence nicely. Well done!
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
27th Oct 2023 1:19am
Hello C,
Thank you so much. I love writing outside of myself. Hope that makes sense. The challenge of being a medium of some sort - for whatever voice enters my mind. hahaha Okay - I'll quit being weird. LOL
She does got us! We are in great hands. She's literally been doing it for millions of years:)
Thank you so much. I love writing outside of myself. Hope that makes sense. The challenge of being a medium of some sort - for whatever voice enters my mind. hahaha Okay - I'll quit being weird. LOL
She does got us! We are in great hands. She's literally been doing it for millions of years:)
Re. Mother of Bones
18th Oct 2023 1:55pm
Wow, how could I miss this one? I simply loved it. The part about moon pills was my favorite. I sense a moon lover :) Thanks for sharing!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
27th Oct 2023 1:23am
Hey Moondus. hehehe
Yes - you are sensing right!
It's such a lighthouse for me. Helps guide certain pieces that I write.
Hope that makes sense?
Anyhow, thanks for the snaps on this write and the RL amigo
it's appreciated!
Yes - you are sensing right!
It's such a lighthouse for me. Helps guide certain pieces that I write.
Hope that makes sense?
Anyhow, thanks for the snaps on this write and the RL amigo
it's appreciated!
Re. Mother of Bones
25th Oct 2023 6:54am
Dear A,
Alas, if only people would take the cue from mother earths work ethic! Never give up, exhausting though it may be. I enjoyed the perspective of this poem immensely. Wonderful write. H🌷
Alas, if only people would take the cue from mother earths work ethic! Never give up, exhausting though it may be. I enjoyed the perspective of this poem immensely. Wonderful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
27th Oct 2023 1:30am
Hi Honoria:)
Yes - the work ethic. To continue the forward march.
Every new day is her gifted blessing - and thank goodness:)
So happy to see ya chica
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Yes - the work ethic. To continue the forward march.
Every new day is her gifted blessing - and thank goodness:)
So happy to see ya chica
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Re. Mother of Bones
29th Oct 2023 3:11am
We do indeed have to swallow a lot of crap here on Mother Earth. Some will swallow more of it than others, of course. I don't think that giant comet is gonna end it for us (our generation at least). It's gonna be the climate, war or disease, right? Sorry, just tryna cheer you up. ;-)
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
29th Oct 2023 3:18am
The title just popped into my mind. It grew from there.
There's a lot going on in the world.
All justified but still.
Anyhow thanks for commenting amigo:)
There's a lot going on in the world.
All justified but still.
Anyhow thanks for commenting amigo:)
Re: Re. Mother of Bones
29th Oct 2023 3:22am
Hmmmm, not sure all is totally justified. This Israel-Gaza & Ukraine-Russia conflict is very unsettling. I don't know how I could cope with being in either of those war zones, to be honest.
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Re: Re. Mother of Bones
29th Oct 2023 3:26am
I mean people wanting to kill other people. War or just random crazy people on the street. But what else do you do. Stand there and let yourself be
cut down. Things are so volatile right now.
Scary time:(
cut down. Things are so volatile right now.
Scary time:(
Re: Re. Mother of Bones
29th Oct 2023 3:29am