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Haiku - Ponder 1
Published 14th Oct 2023
Author's Note
Just a little eclipse ditty. The background is an image of my porch painted with cool shadow shapes.
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30th Oct 2023 7:35am
Dear GW,
Interesting perspective of porch and eclipse. I like the intensity of it through the selected economy of words. I like the way I can create other images and pictures relating to an eclipse with how you’ve created this. Wonderful write. H🌷
Interesting perspective of porch and eclipse. I like the intensity of it through the selected economy of words. I like the way I can create other images and pictures relating to an eclipse with how you’ve created this. Wonderful write. H🌷
5th Nov 2023 8:36pm
Thank you so much, Honoria🌹❣ I've missed you very much. My job crisis is finally over so I can dedicate that brain space to writing again. I hope all is well with you❣
