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Birthday
Hope You Like Your Birthday Surprise
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Hope You Like Your Birthday Surprise
"Open your eyes" was
what one said to Ben,
who is happy to see Jen.
Written by
Green_Arrow
Published
2nd Oct 2023
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The title of this kirkos poem happens to be what one person says after a lover does what a friend says and opens those eyes.
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#birthday
#fiction
#friendship
#happiness
#lover
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