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Hope You Like Your Birthday Surprise
"Open your eyes" was
what one said to Ben,
who is happy to see Jen.
what one said to Ben,
who is happy to see Jen.
Published 2nd Oct 2023
Author's Note
The title of this kirkos poem happens to be what one person says after a lover does what a friend says and opens those eyes.
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