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Sesame Street Roadshow
Crown the coke Queen...Jewels high on her head...She thought she'd have a weekend taste...Once was a beauty Queen, Jump to a junkie fiend...With a monkey on her back. Boy toy, "Needle Boy Roy" all the girls thinks he's hot...His grand slam ideal date is...First shot is for free...Now your begging for me...One eye pirate Pete, now he's the pimp, with a treasure chest of pussies to go, for all the grease bag John's to know. Trains his girls face down ass up...Doggy style bitches, down on all fours just looking to score with a ten cent hit they'll never quit. Barbie & Ken used to have it all, until they starting roasting the glass, 8 Ball a day, keeps the doctor away & Ken works no more. Lost their careers...Lost their Barbie Town House...But Ken found a new job, turn Barbie's Winnebago into a traveling lab, They don't care as the point of the needle...Flash card red...Run it in. Smoke & mirrors...Lines a hot rail inhale...Exhale smoke. The jeering Jester... He's the game face of the day...Crooked grin...Not a dentist's friend. CAUTION DO NOT TRY THESE THINGS AT HOME.
Published 2nd Oct 2023
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4th Oct 2023 5:39am
I like this...Wow.
This is a little outside of my experience--when I used drugs, I preferred my women NOT be drug-users. So, it's a different point of view.
Very rhythmic, pulsing, with dense rhyming scheme.
You should check out the book length poem, The Wild Party, by Frederic M March.
It's a 1920s era poem written about flappers and gangsters and bootlegging and so on. Yet the poem is very musical, almost light-verse, the rhymes and music reminiscent more of Dr. Seuss than Raymond Chandler.
Great images, btw! Especially liked the idea of Ken and Barbie hitting the road in the Winnebago and turning it into a meth lab!
Much to enjoy here!
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This is a little outside of my experience--when I used drugs, I preferred my women NOT be drug-users. So, it's a different point of view.
Very rhythmic, pulsing, with dense rhyming scheme.
You should check out the book length poem, The Wild Party, by Frederic M March.
It's a 1920s era poem written about flappers and gangsters and bootlegging and so on. Yet the poem is very musical, almost light-verse, the rhymes and music reminiscent more of Dr. Seuss than Raymond Chandler.
Great images, btw! Especially liked the idea of Ken and Barbie hitting the road in the Winnebago and turning it into a meth lab!
Much to enjoy here!
And LIKED!
5th Oct 2023 6:59pm
Glad you enjoyed...I will definitely check out & read "The Wild Party" by Frederic M March...Thank you so much for reading my words & taking the time to comment...It means alot.
5th Oct 2023 8:15pm
5th Oct 2023 11:27pm
No problem...It's a bit over the top & exaggerated, with it's dry humor lines. My heart goes to the addict, for I am one myself. Sometimes I have to put some humor for such an ugly thing...Cause if I didn't I would die crying.
20th Oct 2023 2:30pm
You really capture the essence of the picture prompt, love it! perfection with your lines!! Keep that ink flowing!
