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Oculus
Oculus operation.
Offices, occupation.
Opulent alteration.
Promises, postulation.
Provident conservation.
Documents, commendation.
Monument nomination.
Homages, proclamation.
Prominent promulgation.
Pompousness, population.
Cognizant correlation.
Knowledges, propagation.
Charlatan consolation.
Loftiness, contemplation.
Consciousness combinations.
Haughtiness, ostentation.
Audited formulation.
Fraudulent, obligation.
Bottomless modulation.
Thoughtfulness, confiscation.
Sorcerous domination.
Hostages, concentration.
Somnolent compensation.
Argument, augmentation.
Slaughterous provocation.
Raucousness, confrontation.
Ominous altercation.
Monstrousness, condemnation.
Obvious observation.
Consequence, connotation.
Guardian confirmation.
Glorious, convocation.
Offices, occupation.
Opulent alteration.
Promises, postulation.
Provident conservation.
Documents, commendation.
Monument nomination.
Homages, proclamation.
Prominent promulgation.
Pompousness, population.
Cognizant correlation.
Knowledges, propagation.
Charlatan consolation.
Loftiness, contemplation.
Consciousness combinations.
Haughtiness, ostentation.
Audited formulation.
Fraudulent, obligation.
Bottomless modulation.
Thoughtfulness, confiscation.
Sorcerous domination.
Hostages, concentration.
Somnolent compensation.
Argument, augmentation.
Slaughterous provocation.
Raucousness, confrontation.
Ominous altercation.
Monstrousness, condemnation.
Obvious observation.
Consequence, connotation.
Guardian confirmation.
Glorious, convocation.
Published 27th Sep 2023
Author's Note
This is about what nationalism and pride in one's government will do to the mind. Trusting in materialism, greed, power, and influence will brainwash you. As it goes through, it shows the corruption, and the conflict of ruling people. In the end, all-out war, every time. That is humankind's disposition, when it comes to self-rule, on an individual scale, and on a massive scale. With the interjection of technology, it has become a scary reality. We live in the age of an ultimate lesson.
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28th Sep 2023 8:28am
Hello C
This is absolutely amazing, usually i can find words to describe things but this piece left me speechless.
I found the imprint and impact of it very intense. Your way of blending as one with the written\given words is
like an element of its own. I dont know if I would call it wind or fire, a bit of both. Your writing style is always
inspiring to me.
I have mentioned it before but I feel there is a trance like state your words reach, this is the gift of knowing how
to mold ink into poems. I am kind of reminded of some songs by the group Swans who had a hypnotic effect.
Kind of blending the sane with the insane, mind you I mean this as a compliment in a way that your style is just so very much your own.
Thanks for your inklings!!!
greets
A
This is absolutely amazing, usually i can find words to describe things but this piece left me speechless.
I found the imprint and impact of it very intense. Your way of blending as one with the written\given words is
like an element of its own. I dont know if I would call it wind or fire, a bit of both. Your writing style is always
inspiring to me.
I have mentioned it before but I feel there is a trance like state your words reach, this is the gift of knowing how
to mold ink into poems. I am kind of reminded of some songs by the group Swans who had a hypnotic effect.
Kind of blending the sane with the insane, mind you I mean this as a compliment in a way that your style is just so very much your own.
Thanks for your inklings!!!
greets
A
28th Sep 2023 4:09pm
Wow, thanks for the encouragement. It means a lot, coming from you in particular. From reading some of your poems, you're a very gifted and talented artist yourself. It's good that we can share and appreciate each other's works.
I guess there's a sort of "higher plane" that I write from, in that many things are a "given" to me, that others would wildly guess at, or perhaps consider either false, or somewhat profound. That enables me to capture the angles of perception in such things as I do. It is becoming rather obvious that the world and its governments are corrupt, though.
My style consists of being "grounded" in my conviction, thus when I'm "building" from the "foundation", it holds unique characteristics to my beliefs, as well as my style. The "cornerstone" of my faith and beliefs is beyond this age. I have a sort of zeal when I'm focused on such topics.
Anyway, thanks for the considerate review. I hope to be checking out your works in the future, as well as sharing some new ones. Take care!
I guess there's a sort of "higher plane" that I write from, in that many things are a "given" to me, that others would wildly guess at, or perhaps consider either false, or somewhat profound. That enables me to capture the angles of perception in such things as I do. It is becoming rather obvious that the world and its governments are corrupt, though.
My style consists of being "grounded" in my conviction, thus when I'm "building" from the "foundation", it holds unique characteristics to my beliefs, as well as my style. The "cornerstone" of my faith and beliefs is beyond this age. I have a sort of zeal when I'm focused on such topics.
Anyway, thanks for the considerate review. I hope to be checking out your works in the future, as well as sharing some new ones. Take care!
