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Broken images
Shattered pieces of the mirror on the ground
every piece forms a sound
of what I always wanted to be yet not
Screams of my past caused said destruction
loud from afar, then soft whispers so near
that only I only can hear
I catch a faint glance of myself
in the messy shards
these are images Id love to discard
Trying to put these scattered pieces back together
my fingers and soul blood-stained forever
I need to heal in order to see myself again...
every piece forms a sound
of what I always wanted to be yet not
Screams of my past caused said destruction
loud from afar, then soft whispers so near
that only I only can hear
I catch a faint glance of myself
in the messy shards
these are images Id love to discard
Trying to put these scattered pieces back together
my fingers and soul blood-stained forever
I need to heal in order to see myself again...
Written by
mysteriouslady
Published 22nd Sep 2023
Author's Note
Entered in the mirror mirror on the wall comp...
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Re. Broken images
22nd Sep 2023 1:00am
Self-reflection, literally. I found the poem quite moving. You need to fix that mirror for sure!
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22nd Sep 2023 1:03am
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22nd Sep 2023 1:05am
Haha, good! This write reads & bleeds 'sadly' like a winner. (re. comp) ;-)
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22nd Sep 2023 1:06am
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22nd Sep 2023 2:07am
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22nd Sep 2023 2:33am
It's really hard picking up those broken pieces when each piece carries it's own memories. Tight
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Especially when a lot of those memories cut so deep youll never mend....Thanks babe. <3
Re. Broken images
22nd Sep 2023 3:25am
hello beautiful Mysterious one I feel the deep emotions here 💕 hugs my friend...
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22nd Sep 2023 10:33pm
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Re. Broken images
22nd Sep 2023 10:45am
A poem is a mirror that can't be broken...
Glass mirrors are blind to who is on the inside. Let your verse be the song of you that everyone, including you can hear...
Defining yourself with smoke and mirrors is just a disguise for who we pretend to be. Shatter the image and break out from behind your superficial reflection A...
Much love!
JJ
Glass mirrors are blind to who is on the inside. Let your verse be the song of you that everyone, including you can hear...
Defining yourself with smoke and mirrors is just a disguise for who we pretend to be. Shatter the image and break out from behind your superficial reflection A...
Much love!
JJ
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22nd Sep 2023 10:39pm
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Re. Broken images
22nd Sep 2023 2:37pm
Very nicely done. The way to healing is never easy. Good luck in the comp. Regards, Robert.
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2023 8:54am
Oh my!
This is so exquisite on so many levels
Blessings to you
My poetess
This is so exquisite on so many levels
Blessings to you
My poetess
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