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One, two, three, it's raining(haikuplet)
Oh hey, it's raining
Has it been raining all day?
No, I don't think so...
~
Rain hits the pavement
Can't wait to be within rain
Beauty is right yonder
~
I see before me
Trickling its way on down, yes
Just to let it be...
Has it been raining all day?
No, I don't think so...
~
Rain hits the pavement
Can't wait to be within rain
Beauty is right yonder
~
I see before me
Trickling its way on down, yes
Just to let it be...
Published 15th Sep 2023
Author's Note
An old poem I wrote a month ago. Hope you enjoy!
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26th Feb 2024 10:31pm
Awesome haiku written here. I love the rain and this poem captivates me. Nicely done.
6th Mar 2024 2:04pm
