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The Greater Good
There is risk in all derision
Since payback is a beastly bitch
Which haunts every rude decision
Folks make to scratch their mean streak itch.
And round and round the itch will go,
In perpetual invective,
Which will not ebb as much as flow
As the knee-jerk's first corrective.
Unschooled, as they always are,
The reactionaries abound
Loving to spread blame near and far
In busybody Sensurround,
Which, stupidly, they hope will shame...
Those aware of their shitty game!
Since payback is a beastly bitch
Which haunts every rude decision
Folks make to scratch their mean streak itch.
And round and round the itch will go,
In perpetual invective,
Which will not ebb as much as flow
As the knee-jerk's first corrective.
Unschooled, as they always are,
The reactionaries abound
Loving to spread blame near and far
In busybody Sensurround,
Which, stupidly, they hope will shame...
Those aware of their shitty game!
Published 15th Sep 2023
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15th Sep 2023 00:22am
Ha! This is EXCELLENT!
Someone recently asked me if I believe success was the ultimate revenge. I answered, "No, when one is aware there is no revenge. Only compassion."
Someone recently asked me if I believe success was the ultimate revenge. I answered, "No, when one is aware there is no revenge. Only compassion."
There's such an obvious gap between leadership and the rest of us where it becomes clear that getting things done for the commoners takes a back seat to electioneering.
15th Sep 2023 00:58am
15th Sep 2023 1:46am
15th Sep 2023 1:48am
I took this as a reprimand but mine is not a mean streak
as to an honest one...
as to an honest one...
15th Sep 2023 2:51am
Oh, I didn't have anyone specific in mind.
More a comment on broader social trends,
and It's not like I have a perfect track record either:)
More a comment on broader social trends,
and It's not like I have a perfect track record either:)
17th Sep 2023 00:28am
I don't think everyone needs to agree - but at least have some grace in disagreeing.
The art of debate has been lost to moral high ground and like you expressed - public shaming.
We are made of a society of different people and outlooks. That should be okay even if your stance on a
subject goes against the norm.
The art of debate has been lost to moral high ground and like you expressed - public shaming.
We are made of a society of different people and outlooks. That should be okay even if your stance on a
subject goes against the norm.
17th Sep 2023 7:48am
I am totally on board with graciousness, but it seems like we've gotten to a point where the first thing the players do is attack the referees.
Somehow we have to see that the bravest among us are the ones who prove they really want a peaceful society by their example, like getting rid of their weapons or just rededicating themselves to mutually supportive discourse, and that can most certainly be done even when disagreeing, just as you say:)
A great place to start is with Avanti's latest poem...THE SACRED PAUSE.
Somehow we have to see that the bravest among us are the ones who prove they really want a peaceful society by their example, like getting rid of their weapons or just rededicating themselves to mutually supportive discourse, and that can most certainly be done even when disagreeing, just as you say:)
A great place to start is with Avanti's latest poem...THE SACRED PAUSE.
