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Scatter to the Wind
Throw me out to the wind
To flow within its guiding glide
A shift in its path strings me along
Over oceans deprived of horizons
No point or reason in our direction
Oh the waves part away
Us having caused this dismay
I yearn for this movement a turn
Maybe now’s a good time
To let the spiraled scatters
Fall
Rid to a place of ever rest
When will this wind blow me it’s last kiss?
To flow within its guiding glide
A shift in its path strings me along
Over oceans deprived of horizons
No point or reason in our direction
Oh the waves part away
Us having caused this dismay
I yearn for this movement a turn
Maybe now’s a good time
To let the spiraled scatters
Fall
Rid to a place of ever rest
When will this wind blow me it’s last kiss?
Published 10th Sep 2023
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6th Dec 2023 6:01am
Nice sense of direction, and flow of enveloping dimension. You seem to capture transition quite well in an unraveling theme to add emotion and metaphor. With that said, there's more than meets the eye in this. It's quite descriptive and poetic in its "angles" of perception. A clear distinction of showing course is present. Anyway, hope this helps. Thanks for sharing!
