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Death
Breath
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Breath
Breath
The first we take
And the last
It's a contradiction
A giver and a taker
Written by
Maple666
Published
6th Sep 2023
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#birth
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Re. Breath
Kinkpoet
6th Sep 2023 5:26pm
Nice wordplay.🙏
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Maple666
6th Sep 2023 5:29pm
Thank you 🙏
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AspergerPoet56
6th Sep 2023 5:30pm
yes shoet but profound
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Maple666
6th Sep 2023 5:48pm
Thank you 🙏
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moroccanpoet
6th Sep 2023 5:57pm
We breathe
The first thing we take
When we are born
Continue with us
And the last thing we take out
when we die
We throw it away in moments, dying
It is the contradiction of the universe
The giver and the taker
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Maple666
6th Sep 2023 9:20pm
Thank you for reading .
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LilDragonFly
6th Sep 2023 6:26pm
Love this... such great brevity... pithy... resounding...
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Maple666
6th Sep 2023 9:20pm
Thank you 🙏
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TheOralizer
6th Sep 2023 9:22pm
Reminder of the realities of life; it it's longest very short. Hugs and peace, Oral
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Maple666
6th Sep 2023 10:36pm
Thank you 🙏
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