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Air Melancholia
I am poor company these days
Now knowing what I know
Of thought as mere sub-cranial glow
That faintly comes and rarely stays
And more rarely gives a solace here
Or a sorely needed flair
For elegance beyond compare,
As reverence for the yesteryear
Which held that which we held so dear;
No more than a bird holds flight
Forevermore in lunar light
When thoughts aglow make it all too clear
That every bird must land and die
And relinquish its poor avian soul,
Like Major Tom to ground control...
To teach much younger birds to fly.
Now knowing what I know
Of thought as mere sub-cranial glow
That faintly comes and rarely stays
And more rarely gives a solace here
Or a sorely needed flair
For elegance beyond compare,
As reverence for the yesteryear
Which held that which we held so dear;
No more than a bird holds flight
Forevermore in lunar light
When thoughts aglow make it all too clear
That every bird must land and die
And relinquish its poor avian soul,
Like Major Tom to ground control...
To teach much younger birds to fly.
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4th Sep 2023 11:09pm
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5th Sep 2023 1:39am
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5th Sep 2023 2:40am
Turning 60 next week has me in a dreadful mood.
Always best to make a note of it and move on:)
Always best to make a note of it and move on:)
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5th Sep 2023 3:25pm
you're still young I feel you though... it's just a number my husband is 62 and all the women still check him out ❤️
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5th Sep 2023 9:00pm
Lol...well I trust that's all for the best:)
I never leave the house except for the grocery store and those gals are preoccupied with the shelves! Besides, my wife would fervently disapprove! She is very territorial that way:)
Thanks for cheering me up though, you are very awesome for doing that:)
I never leave the house except for the grocery store and those gals are preoccupied with the shelves! Besides, my wife would fervently disapprove! She is very territorial that way:)
Thanks for cheering me up though, you are very awesome for doing that:)
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5th Sep 2023 9:03pm
oh don't get me wrong I am territorial too but the women just love my husband it used to get to me but I don't let it bother me anymore ❤️ and your welcome you deserve a great birthday 😊
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5th Sep 2023 9:17pm
That's the spirit...don't let him wander too much cuz he will love the attention!
We will be stepping out to a Tiki bar for Friday night cocktails with some long time friends.
Haven't done that in awhile! Thanx again!
We will be stepping out to a Tiki bar for Friday night cocktails with some long time friends.
Haven't done that in awhile! Thanx again!
Re. Air Melancholia
5th Sep 2023 2:24am
This write seems a wonderful reflection of the world today and the many uncertainties.
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5th Sep 2023 2:48am
Thanks! And hitting the big sixty mark has me thinking more and more about the state of social security.
Re. Air Melancholia
5th Sep 2023 2:31am
Aging birds of a feather flock together. Poignant relatable write.
Keep flying.
Keep flying.
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5th Sep 2023 2:51am
Re. Air Melancholia
Powerfully felt and beautifully crafted per your skillful pen.
Loved the depths that you reach with such poetic class and structure. I wish to one day develop that kind of written grace, it's breathtaking, imo.
Aging isn't for p#ssies, that's for sure! (had to be said!) Take some solace knowing you're not alone. I hit 50 in Feb of this year and I still have moments where I'm left wide eyed in unbelief!!!
btw, 60 looks great on you.. Happy Birthday, MS.
I am delighted you're here with us
🌹-🎂🎁 🎊 🍾
Loved the depths that you reach with such poetic class and structure. I wish to one day develop that kind of written grace, it's breathtaking, imo.
Aging isn't for p#ssies, that's for sure! (had to be said!) Take some solace knowing you're not alone. I hit 50 in Feb of this year and I still have moments where I'm left wide eyed in unbelief!!!
btw, 60 looks great on you.. Happy Birthday, MS.
I am delighted you're here with us
🌹-🎂🎁 🎊 🍾
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5th Sep 2023 10:29am
Thanks Blue!
You are a peerless cheerleader, just when I needed one:)
You are a peerless cheerleader, just when I needed one:)
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6th Sep 2023 12:13pm
Never mind, Midnight.
Console yourself with the the thought that you'll never be this young again ⚰️😬
May everything keep on working.
👍😎👍
Console yourself with the the thought that you'll never be this young again ⚰️😬
May everything keep on working.
👍😎👍
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6th Sep 2023 12:20pm
That's awesome!
Reminds me of a consolation meme I saw the other day which said that we could think of this as the hottest summer that ever was or the coolest summer of the rest of our lives!
I almost died laughing:)
Reminds me of a consolation meme I saw the other day which said that we could think of this as the hottest summer that ever was or the coolest summer of the rest of our lives!
I almost died laughing:)
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