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Sanctuary Featuring WillowWhimsies
if the cares of your day feel heavy
pressing into shoulders and aching back
legs strained and weary
I've got a cure for that
lay yourself down
place your head in my lap
close your eyes
and give yourself over
while I cater to your needs
a tender kiss for each temple
another for each eye
a trail of them along the side of your face
heated breath upon your neck
as fingers seek your tension
kneading gently for relief
claws - for now - will be held in check
used only very lightly
softly raising tingles upon your flesh
inciting chills with sensually warming roots
and before you know it
tender pressure will follow suit
fanning hands to either side
slipping between your dreads
careful of pulling
I'll massage your cradled head
I leave it to you when you're ready to move
allowing me access to the rest
not a spot will go untended
every ache and throb will have its due
fingers - palms - breath
knuckles and lips
I'll employ them all on you
relax
let me pay homage
to every inch of you
yes..baby..caress me
my blue collared body needs your touch
be my Calgon..take me away
as i lay tranquil in the pillow of your breast
resting under the cresting shade of your willow
immerse me in your cauldron
of healing elements
feed me your nurturing sentiments
proven self evident through the strokes
of your fingertips
and the gingerness of your lips
pressing..addressing temples with
circular rhythms and the softness of kisses
soothing the mind as your palms
massages and calms the inner storm
being so warm and affectionate
so strong and deliberate in how you knead me
tenderizing my hardened day through
the focused sinew of your
divine womanhood
humming sacred hymns
while strumming my body like a harp
a musical instrument
under the complete
influence of your expertise
plucking loose the strings of balled tension
devoting digits as my muscle relaxer
easing and teasing flows simultaneously
in tune to my every movement
your omnipresence gracing my entire being
tending to my leathered soul
leaving me amazed at the breadth of you
as the breath of you serenades like a summer breeze
whispering across the
aching limbs of this weathered tree
promising the sap seeping at the bark
its own happy ending
subdued in sweet patience
as you pay homage to me in increments
through mind body soul and spirit
Published 20th Aug 2023
| Edited 22nd Aug 2023
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I loved unwinding with this amazing writing. 😊
I love the iridescence of the image
I love the iridescence of the image
20th Aug 2023 5:07pm
Hottest lines, reinforced by the picture:
let me pay homage
to every inch of you
let me pay homage
to every inch of you
20th Aug 2023 11:53pm
Always an pleasure to vibe with you, Naajir. My pen is available anytime.
I'm so glad we got to rock poetically on this vibe .
An oldie but goodie but still relevant nonetheless
The synergy felt so organic
The pleasure was mines as well
Thank you for sharing your fluid and fantastic artistry
With me on this journey Willow
I look forward to more of our collaborative expressions
However which way they come
Much respect always
Naaj
An oldie but goodie but still relevant nonetheless
The synergy felt so organic
The pleasure was mines as well
Thank you for sharing your fluid and fantastic artistry
With me on this journey Willow
I look forward to more of our collaborative expressions
However which way they come
Much respect always
Naaj
21st Aug 2023 1:12pm
What a pleasant write up you have. I am feeling relaxed while reading this. And this sexy picture is compelling to read whole poem...Very cute.. The intimacy between the couple is clearly visible.🥰
2nd Sep 2023 2:07pm
"my blue collared body..." - This is an outstanding description. It adds a humbleness to stating that we indeed are what we are, flawed by circumstance and yet the will to soar with what we offer the other person .
The collaboration as a whole is beautiful. There's no other word to use to describe it. And I salute your willingness to show a tender side to compliment her portion of the write. It unifies the theme. This is what the art of writing (together) is supposed to look like.
Also, I actually edited my newest write a bit, because y'all motivated me in a better direction.
That is a compliment to the skill you two displayed.
So well done, y'all.
The collaboration as a whole is beautiful. There's no other word to use to describe it. And I salute your willingness to show a tender side to compliment her portion of the write. It unifies the theme. This is what the art of writing (together) is supposed to look like.
Also, I actually edited my newest write a bit, because y'all motivated me in a better direction.
That is a compliment to the skill you two displayed.
So well done, y'all.
4th Sep 2023 1:27am
What a great collaboration!
Reading each portion was like unfolding tension.
Setting it free with such descriptive tenderness. I agree with all of the comments.
So relaxing and the picture is tasteful and sexy.
Reading each portion was like unfolding tension.
Setting it free with such descriptive tenderness. I agree with all of the comments.
So relaxing and the picture is tasteful and sexy.
25th Oct 2024 10:23am
25th Oct 2024 2:26pm
Great expression of love.and humbleness with appreciation. A vivid picture of a moment well.sketched.
Regards
KS
Regards
KS
Having reread this I am stirred again by the powerful of picture of interracial love. Inspired a rhyme in my mind (words put in the white woman's mouth, harking back to the slave plantation era):
My big Mandingo,
teach me your lingo
of African love-
making to this dove,
as I surrender
to strong but tender
moves on my body
as you embrace me
in sanctuary
of nude liberty.
My big Mandingo,
teach me your lingo
of African love-
making to this dove,
as I surrender
to strong but tender
moves on my body
as you embrace me
in sanctuary
of nude liberty.
26th Oct 2024 7:25am
As PS to my last comment - I have developed the rhyming caption as a poem in its own right, published in this section today as My Big Mandingo.
26th Oct 2024 3:54pm
Your pens make phenomenal music together. Why didn’t I see this sensual masterpiece before?
So happy that you resurrected it.
So happy that you resurrected it.
