Lace

hello beautiful Debbie I love the deep passion here so luscious 💕

Thank you so very much 💜

Ah... what lies beneath... nice sensual write db...

Thank you Lil! 💜

I loved the hiding  passion and sensuality  in your poem.
I also believe that you are a passionate woman

Thank you so much! 😊

When that feasting upon all that's usually hidden becomes almost an addiction. Once that forbidden place is smoldering, it's incredibly difficult to put out that particular kind of fire...

Your metaphoric imagery captivates as your pen carves such an intriguing path through the reveal of such wrought emotionality .

This feels more organic and ends with a personal intense gut punch of a line that had me suck in my breath, in understanding.

Bravo, dear lady... bravo!

Thanks for being here with us, d-bear  
🌹💙 - B

Hi! I really appreciate all your comments, thank you so much. It's those forbidden fires that get me into trouble, lol
Have a wonderful night. 🤗

'My heart is in your teeth.  
As you greedily feast on what lies beneath.'

Killer final two lines, Debbie. The perfect ending to an excellent poem. Nice one 💐

I liked it too, lol.
Thanks for checking out, always nice to see you. 😊

This is some very sexy imagery
laced with a strong undercurrent of passion
Very nice indeed!!!

Hi! Thank you for checking out. 😊

I do love the passion in this piece Debbie.

🙏 Mo

Thank you so much for reading! 😊