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Shooting Stars on the Hill
I went to look for meteors
up the hill in the dark
climbing away from the city lights
every step wishing the clouds away
I was hoping to catch one
and put it in my pocket
to keep it safe for you
but it wasn't our lucky day
up the hill in the dark
climbing away from the city lights
every step wishing the clouds away
I was hoping to catch one
and put it in my pocket
to keep it safe for you
but it wasn't our lucky day
Published 13th Aug 2023
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13th Aug 2023 2:50pm
14th Aug 2023 11:58pm
So you wont be wanting the $200 million dollars in aid the US gives you then, or the lucrative trade deals without which your economy would crash.
https://www.state.gov/u-s-relations-with-jamaica/.
Thank you for your reply which I make no apology for repeating here:
" You and the US can take your money and shove it up your asses."
Sadly, it reveals much about who you are and the hatred you carry which cripples your soul.
Perhaps any talent you perceive you have would be better employed as a positive force for good, rather than blindly pursuing your dubious obsession with assholes. Remember Marley.
Peace 4 our world ~ Abra
https://www.state.gov/u-s-relations-with-jamaica/.
Thank you for your reply which I make no apology for repeating here:
" You and the US can take your money and shove it up your asses."
Sadly, it reveals much about who you are and the hatred you carry which cripples your soul.
Perhaps any talent you perceive you have would be better employed as a positive force for good, rather than blindly pursuing your dubious obsession with assholes. Remember Marley.
Peace 4 our world ~ Abra
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7th Sep 2023 7:21am
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7th Sep 2023 7:25am
No, pussy -- that honor is reserved for my Jamaican friend who specializes in copy and paste in lieu of reasoned debate. I believe he has now flown the coup.
