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Quiet
I crave the rare quiet of the world.
Where there is no need to be heard.
Silent stoic mountains with their stone stare
penetrate my turmoiled soul.
I rupture with rapture.
Soundless pine and evergreen,
populate so serene.
Everything is so incredibly still,
nothing moves.
Even my thoughts become motionless.
Suspended in a paralysis of peace.
Yet my heart beats a gentle pound.
To an untamed, untarnished beauty.
Exquisitely profound.
Where there is no need to be heard.
Silent stoic mountains with their stone stare
penetrate my turmoiled soul.
I rupture with rapture.
Soundless pine and evergreen,
populate so serene.
Everything is so incredibly still,
nothing moves.
Even my thoughts become motionless.
Suspended in a paralysis of peace.
Yet my heart beats a gentle pound.
To an untamed, untarnished beauty.
Exquisitely profound.
Author's Note
Dreaming of Alaska.......
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Re. Quiet
10th Aug 2023 3:43am
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10th Aug 2023 3:50am
My sister lives in Alaska. I've been there many times and there really are no adequate words to convey the raw beauty. I would gladly take you 😊
Thank you for putting the biggest smile on my face.
Thank you for putting the biggest smile on my face.
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10th Aug 2023 4:03am
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2023 4:07am
Lovely rhyming and passion for nature. It's important to have a go to place to visit, even if it's just in our thoughts.
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10th Aug 2023 4:22am
Thank you so much. I'm happiest when I'm in nature. Mountains like put me in a trance, lol
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Dreaming of Alaska....... who can blame you?! Liked your description of stoney faced mountains watching over you, as if somehow protecting your peace. I once wrote a poem about stone circles, called, 'Stanton Drew' cos that's where these particular stones were, I stumbled upon in Somerset. I think you would like it, both the poem & the place, lol.😊
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10th Aug 2023 2:12pm
Re. Quiet
10th Aug 2023 1:58pm
I’ve always wanted to take a cruise to Alaska. Thank you for taking me there, poetess.
This is lovely.
This is lovely.
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10th Aug 2023 2:13pm
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10th Aug 2023 11:18pm
May I go with you? It sounds like all things wonderful. This poem had such a warmth to it <3
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11th Aug 2023 00:26am
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"rupture with rapture.""This poem is the epitome of Serenity. a specimen of faith and absolute enlightenment; I love the stoicism of the mountains and their patience long overlooked..Thanks foe the wisdom.
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12th Aug 2023 3:17pm
Aww thank u so much for such nice comments.
I am deeply drawn to mountains.
I'm glad you liked it. 😊
I am deeply drawn to mountains.
I'm glad you liked it. 😊
Re. Quiet
26th Feb 2024 4:51pm
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26th Feb 2024 5:27pm
Makes me so happy you enjoyed it. And I get to reread it myself, lol
You take care too!
You take care too!