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Tempest Marauder
Of the fertile embryos tempest marauder
as arrogant winds fall upon screaming lungs
haunting torrents of swooning tongues
clutching tremors of twilight sprung
with tyranny's hypochondria's drums
of the fertile embryos tempest marauder
as arrogant winds fall upon screaming lungs
haunting torrents of swooning tongues
clutching tremors of twilight sprung
with tyranny's hypochondria's drums
of the fertile embryos tempest marauder
Published 9th Aug 2023
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9th Aug 2023 11:51am
So many elements within...
Rhyme scheme...
Repetition...
Double possessive... (If not a thing it is now... :)))
Nice interwoven surrealism...
To my perception...
And brought image alive...
Rhyme scheme...
Repetition...
Double possessive... (If not a thing it is now... :)))
Nice interwoven surrealism...
To my perception...
And brought image alive...
9th Aug 2023 11:53am
