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Breathe Out
let the shit dissolve
be it real or imaginary
we all have to detox the mind
to survive
be it real or imaginary
we all have to detox the mind
to survive
Published 8th Aug 2023
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written 4 yrs ago
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8th Aug 2023 4:21pm
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8th Aug 2023 11:55pm
So many minds. So much toxicity...and its
only getting worse.
Well penned.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
only getting worse.
Well penned.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
9th Aug 2023 00:08am
Bleach also helps! 😜 Seriously though, of course I have seen the deeper meaning in your poem. This says to me, live & let live, be the bigger man (in your case). One more... keep grudges to a bare minimum. I very much like your lesson.
I do have arguement with people but as far as im cincerned once its finished thats it have had my say
but Sally others think not besr a grudge im just wired in a way that I dont
but Sally others think not besr a grudge im just wired in a way that I dont
9th Aug 2023 00:21am
Over time, reconciliation is possible. I mean look at The Beatles & Gary Barlow & Robbie Williams from Take That! I know a lot of that had to do with money, lol, but my point is that forgiveness is always possible from both sides & we should never give up on that, simply because life is too short. We don't want to leave this Earth with unnecessary regrets, right? 😊
9th Aug 2023 00:26am
10th Aug 2023 00:52am
Very true! There's so much shit, sometimes it takes a lot of breathing, though....
❤️k
❤️k
12th Aug 2023 2:03pm
Few words, too many thoughts.
Briefly, fully understood :.Happiness to you
Briefly, fully understood :.Happiness to you
20th Aug 2023 11:57am
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