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Words
My
words
want to
roam around
the city of poems
but a broken heart has
bound them, n always forces
them to come down on paper with tears...
words
want to
roam around
the city of poems
but a broken heart has
bound them, n always forces
them to come down on paper with tears...
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Re: Re. Words
5th Aug 2023 12:08pm
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4th Aug 2023 7:59pm
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5th Aug 2023 12:09pm
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5th Aug 2023 5:32am
Dear D,
I really like the formatting of your poem. The subject of the write is so delicately expressed for something I think a lot of us have experienced and the imagery throughout of trying to heal a broken heart while maintaining hope is lovely. Beautifully written. H🌷
I really like the formatting of your poem. The subject of the write is so delicately expressed for something I think a lot of us have experienced and the imagery throughout of trying to heal a broken heart while maintaining hope is lovely. Beautifully written. H🌷
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Re: Re. Words
5th Aug 2023 12:10pm
Thank you so much dear honoria for reading me n for this nice feedback.. I liked!!
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5th Aug 2023 12:16pm
Shout out your words on stage in performance. Your poetry should be heard. Don't feel silenced. A broken heart doesn't last forever! 😊
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Re: Re. Words
5th Aug 2023 12:37pm
Words from a broken heart are always silent. They doesn't shout but not everyone can understand the hidden pain behind of those words.. Well thanks snaggy for your visit. N yaa you are right...A broken heart doesn't last forever!
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7th Aug 2023 12:30pm
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7th Aug 2023 12:36pm
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7th Aug 2023 4:41pm
The flow of words here is palpable.
Wanting to roam around the city of poems.
To experience all the love and happiness there.
But always returning to the darkness.
Bound with sadness, loss, and tears...
Wishing you much joy and happiness dimpy...
I hope you find your way to those parts of the city.
Wanting to roam around the city of poems.
To experience all the love and happiness there.
But always returning to the darkness.
Bound with sadness, loss, and tears...
Wishing you much joy and happiness dimpy...
I hope you find your way to those parts of the city.
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Re: Re. Words
7th Aug 2023 4:49pm
Hey beautiful
Thank you for taking time to visit my profile.. I'm really glad that you read me.. Thanks much.. N I appreciate your words.. 🥰
Thank you for taking time to visit my profile.. I'm really glad that you read me.. Thanks much.. N I appreciate your words.. 🥰