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thirsty water
One day
the water
felt thirsty,
the flood came
drank the
whole town
n human shadows
started floating
on as a bubbles...
the water
felt thirsty,
the flood came
drank the
whole town
n human shadows
started floating
on as a bubbles...
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Re. thirsty water
3rd Aug 2023 2:50pm
Re: Re. thirsty water
3rd Aug 2023 6:09pm
Also. A huge part of Mather Nature's holdings. But PS: I wonder why Nature has made most of the world's water sea water and thus undrinkable except after some very intricate chemical procedure.
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Re. thirsty water
3rd Aug 2023 7:53pm
Fascinating take (acinowledging the damage these can cause) on how floods swamp communities which are perhaps at worst in the subcontinent (esp Bangladesh).- especially this verse:
n human shadows
started floating
on as a bubbles...
Such can be the force of water in flood.
n human shadows
started floating
on as a bubbles...
Such can be the force of water in flood.
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Re. thirsty water
3rd Aug 2023 9:10pm
Mother nature needs to release because she's hasn't found her Father nature. Keep on writing.
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Re. thirsty water
5th Aug 2023 3:28pm
I envisioned how this could parallel one's breaking point with either family, friends, work, etc. Lashing out and burning a few bridges.
Yes, a dark poem. Shows "Man's" folly in the perception that Mother Nature can be domesticated.
Yes, a dark poem. Shows "Man's" folly in the perception that Mother Nature can be domesticated.
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