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if you can't say anything nice about something, then write a poem
I wish I could say, write
something profound
about our existence
about love
about endurance
to bring it all into
clarity
to show it has some
ultimate purpose
but I
can't
it's all just empty beer
bottles
and busted peanut
shells
scattered
across
a filthy
kitchen
floor
Published 1st Aug 2023
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1st Aug 2023 9:51pm
that filthy kitchen floor just gets so dirty you wish you could t see it and you try to ignore it like life
1st Aug 2023 10:00pm
1st Aug 2023 11:44pm
You did say something profound BK.
I am just here to pick up your peanut shells... :)
I am just here to pick up your peanut shells... :)
2nd Aug 2023 00:42am
2nd Aug 2023 5:52am
Dear BK,
Brava! So well put I can only nod in solidarity. Thank you for writing what I feel. H🌷
Brava! So well put I can only nod in solidarity. Thank you for writing what I feel. H🌷
2nd Aug 2023 1:06pm
2nd Aug 2023 6:05am
I hear the clink and clang of the empty beer bottles as I walk through, accidentally knocking them about.
...This resonates with people and just from the comments alone, there is apparent solidarity within all that filth...
I hear you, bk.
🌹💙 - xo
...This resonates with people and just from the comments alone, there is apparent solidarity within all that filth...
I hear you, bk.
🌹💙 - xo
2nd Aug 2023 1:07pm
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21st Aug 2023 00:29am
Even in the struggle to write comes a raw and honest truth that encompasses life that is too intricate to put into words.
Great work.
Great work.
27th Aug 2023 4:09pm
