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Is It Me
Is it me who should feel guilty
for pleasuring myself without you
in darkness of our room
listening for footsteps above
When you are the one
who shoots off like a rocket
into the tightness of my pussy
unable to hold on
for my orgasm
Because I feel shame
while my clit is vibrated
and I cum within minutes
without you
Doing just like you do
without me
for pleasuring myself without you
in darkness of our room
listening for footsteps above
When you are the one
who shoots off like a rocket
into the tightness of my pussy
unable to hold on
for my orgasm
Because I feel shame
while my clit is vibrated
and I cum within minutes
without you
Doing just like you do
without me
Published 26th Jul 2023
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26th Jul 2023 12:09pm
I send out my most ardent hopes through the ether that your shame eventually turns into pride at self fulfillment. I've learned through the years that taking matters into your own hands should never be something to feel bad about... Just a gentle life lesson learned and left for you to take or leave.
I deeply appreciate your candor and bravery at sharing your experience, it's something that I'm sure will resonate with others.
Glad to have you here with us
🌹B
I deeply appreciate your candor and bravery at sharing your experience, it's something that I'm sure will resonate with others.
Glad to have you here with us
🌹B
29th Jul 2023 11:50pm
I try to listen to my body. It’s something I’ve tried to do as I’ve gone through my twenties. Thanks for stopping by.
26th Jul 2023 6:56pm
Reads as a scornful address to a scorning selfish lover, with these lines the killer point (a 'two can play at that game' stab):
while my clit is vibrated
and I cum within minutes
without you
Doing just like you do
without me
while my clit is vibrated
and I cum within minutes
without you
Doing just like you do
without me
29th Jul 2023 11:51pm
I was hoping that would seal the point in. Because at the end of the day we are both suffering, despite only one of us knowing it.
No, you deserve pleasure too. The impression the poem gives is you have tried to have a more fulfilling mutual relation. However, if they don't put effort in there is no shame in taken matters into your own "hands",
The last sentence is a doozy, "Doing just like you do without me"! I got the implication he's using you, just like you use your inanimate sex toy, to get himself off; with a detached unemotional connection with you.
Your poem conveys your feelings of hurt and loneliness, and possibly inadequateness (shame). Good poem as it draws out emotions.
The last sentence is a doozy, "Doing just like you do without me"! I got the implication he's using you, just like you use your inanimate sex toy, to get himself off; with a detached unemotional connection with you.
Your poem conveys your feelings of hurt and loneliness, and possibly inadequateness (shame). Good poem as it draws out emotions.
